Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

[Dagi]

Hi Susie,

how´s our story doing? Don´t tell me you can´t think of anything romantic to write...

Dagi

[Luvlylittlewing]

One Hand In by moremojo

Jack clenched his eyes shut and held his breath as one greasy cowboy finger slid gently but firmly up his rear passage, his sphincter squeezing against the rare but always welcome pressure; Ennis was a pro, Jack thought to himself, as a second finger, and then a third, joined in the tight digital bouquet forming in his insides.

Jack eased out breath slowly as he felt the knotted fist, the instrument that had given him so much love and pain together, press against his dripping portal, easing its way up, up into his system--Easy, buddy, Jack flashed in his mind as he felt the warm, pulsing entity come to rest deep inside his fraught, quivering intestines.

Unwilling but hotly sincere tears welled up in Jack's eyes as he softly affirmed, "Ennis...Ennis, I love you", feeling so vulnerable yet strangely at peace with his lover so intimately connected to him; only when he blinked away the tears did he recognize Pedro's face, slightly puzzled but determined to please his paying customer, only barely hearing, "Señor, you okay?", whereupon Jack, still slightly dazed, began to relax in preparation for the now unwelcome hand to make its exit.

So beautifully written, and so sad, moremojo!  Thanks for a look into Jack's experience with the Mexican rent boy.  I can imagine that it happened that way: no other one but Ennis would do.  Beautiful work, moremojo.  I'm so glad to see you here.  I've missed you!

[Luvlylittlewing]

Isn´t that one of the most tragic things of this story, that Ennis did make steps toward the sweet life, but too late, or too slowly...

Yes Dagi, agreed!

[Luvlylittlewing]

It's so nice that the boys have a guardian angel.  Or is the blond guy Puck?  Hey, come to think of it, doesn't the devil play the violin?  No, he can't be the devil.

Gary

     The blond man?  No, he's not the devil....

[Luvlylittlewing]

It could be Pan's gay cousin. 

       Too cool, Dagi!

[Luvlylittlewing]

Hey there, Littlewing1957-
How's it going?

I'm doing okay.  How are you, Love?

[Luvlylittlewing]

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Love Susie

Thanks so much Susie!  You guys really are so sweet!      I can't wait to reach my next 1000 post mark! 

[Luvlylittlewing]

.... and there's that mysterious blond fella again!  I'm intrigued ... and he certaintly does have his work cut out for him ... Ennis is as stubborn as a mule!!   You're so brilliant at this littlewing! 

Susie

Thanks for your kind words, SusieDear!  You thought I was gonna say SusieBaby, didn't ya? 

[Luvlylittlewing]

Alma's "misery voice" is so descriptive, Littlewing.  I've never heard of the Black Angus restaurant.  Is that a chain?  Sounds like just the place for Jack and Ennis, but I noticed they couldn't stay there long.     I don't blame them for leaving early.

Gary

Black Angus?  Yes, it's a chain.  They have decent ribs, steaks and seafood there.  And the booths are very secluded!  Perhaps one day I can take you there.

[Luvlylittlewing]

Thanks, Gary baby. You so nasty.

Yeehaw! The countdown 'til I go on vacation is only two days now. I'm gonna miss you guys! What will I do without you guys for three weeks?

What will we do without you?  Just come back to us safe and sound.