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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 12, 2008, 09:02:16 pm ---ah hahahaha
well ladies i Hope this was worth the wait! I can't wait to see the looks on your faces after reading THIS chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/242510.html "Chapter 23"
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Well, what can I say??
I'm glad I wasn't drinking anything while reading this chapter, otherwise, I might be in for a new computer by now!
:o :o :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
I sooooooooo want to hear Ellery now! I wonder what happened with the cuffs? Colson is supposed to be handy with all sorts of 'tools' right? Okay, clearly not police tools! :laugh: :laugh:
Priceless, Louise! You never cease to amaze me.
Update soon please. :)
souxi:
Oh boy that was funny. It,s gonna be priceless when Dupree arrives and tries to get the cuffs off. I think everyone is going to be extreemly embarrassed lol. I think they should stick to scarves in future lol. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
louisev:
and another unexpected twist in our er,
police procedural. Who knew this was a police procedure? hahah.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/242761.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 13, 2008, 03:57:38 pm ---and another unexpected twist in our er,
police procedural. Who knew this was a police procedure? hahah.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/242761.html
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'Twist', is right!
:laugh: :laugh:
Oh, Louise, this is so much fun! *claps hands* Great stuff!
Ellery opened his eyes. “I’m not sure this qualifies as takin it easy over the weekend, boy.”
Ain't that the truth. Never a dull moment in Tourmaline!
Thanks Louise. :-*
frantic65:
Colson is such a bad boy- never let it be said he doesn't take advantage of a prime opportunity to get fancy (& he sure knows that his man can be convinced-even under the circumstances.
And what's up with Jeremy?? Why so nervous? Is he still crushing on his boss?? Nick might get a little jealous!
I loved Ellery threatening Colson with no sugar & Colson laughing it off as the empty threat it was!!
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