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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
belbbmfan:
I agree Marie, a spanking and less cafeïne! ;) ::)
I thought Mel's intervention was sobering though. He really put Ellery's anger towards the whole Amos mess in perspective. The way Ellery was carrying on, it was as if he was the only one frustrated and upset about the new turn of events. Good thing that Wes and Mel are keeping their heads cool.
I hope some of Ellery's foul mood (Colson once called it a 'cranky ass mood' :laugh:) wears off by the time he get home...
Great stuff Louise! As Ellery said 'it never gets old'! Yeehaw.
frantic65:
I dunno-I suggested a spankin', but if he gives Colson half the shit he's giving everyone else so far-he may end up bound & gagged too, sweethearts!! (Sorry-couldn't resist!)
But I agree Marie, I love the interaction between Wes/Ellery & Dupree/Ellery so much too. Ellery is high maintenance for sure, but Wes keeps him in line & I think he is trying to teach Dupree how to run interference when he can't be there.
Ellery does need to seriously cool it over this Amos thing though so he doesn't jeopardize landing those big fish. He needs to realize that that's the best way to get justice for Colson & the others is to get the ringleaders. Not to mention the political implications for Mel & Wes.
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on December 18, 2007, 02:57:42 pm ---I thought Mel's intervention was sobering though. He really put Ellery's anger towards the whole Amos mess in perspective. The way Ellery was caring on, it was as if he was the only one frustrated and upset about the new turn of events. Good thing that Wes and Mel are keeping their heads cool.
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Yes, Fabienne - an excellent observation about Mel. Sobering and perspective are exactly the right words. I was very impressed with how Mel handled that conversation - and I think it had an impact on Ellery, too.
--- Quote from: frantic65 on December 18, 2007, 06:15:30 pm ---I dunno-I suggested a spankin', but if he gives Colson half the shit he's giving everyone else so far-he may end up bound & gagged too, sweethearts!! (Sorry-couldn't resist!)
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Fran, I like the way your mind works! LOL! (Great avatar, btw!)
Marie
louisev:
Okay you girls get half of what you asked for:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/237184.html 'The Rookie, Chapter 4'
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 18, 2007, 10:09:53 pm ---Okay you girls get half of what you asked for:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/237184.html 'The Rookie, Chapter 4'
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SPOILERS
Louise, being with these boys again is wonderful. Seeing Ellery home with Colson and Jeremy home with Nick - makes me believe that all is right with the world. Nope - that briefcase won't be opened tonight. Naughty Ellery has to get that half of what we asked for first! ;D
I really liked seeing Jeremy running his thoughts by Nick. Their relationship seems to be maturing very nicely, and I think college will prove to be a good choice for Nicky, who has a smart brain to go with that smart mouth. These two are so sweet together - "big college words!" LOL!
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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