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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 26, 2008, 02:30:10 pm ---and here is chapter 36 at a record hour of the morning!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/245884.html
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SPOILER
“You ain’t gonna lay on no tropical beach buck naked! Not when I’m around.”
:laugh: Owww, come on now Colson, don't be a bad sport!
I'm glad he agree to the vacation Louise. It really is what they need.
And I had to read the first part twice. At first I thougt Wes was actually in the room, :o or that it was a dream or something... phew! Glad it was just a phone call! :)
louisev:
whoops that wasnt clear was it? hahaha!
mariez:
SPOILERS
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on January 26, 2008, 02:44:20 pm ---... At first I thougt Wes was actually in the room, :o ...
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LOL! Poor Wes is having a hard enough time with the visions in his mind!
I'm glad Colson agreed to the vacation, too. And this chapter made me nostalgic, in a good way. Some references we haven't heard in a while:
..Mr. Please an Thank You..
".. I told ya I didn’t want ta go retire ta some fantasy ranch.”
And, of course, my personal favorite:
“Them ones you can see all the way ta France?... ;D
And, yes, Colson did learn from the best, didn't he?
Thanks,
Marie
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 26, 2008, 02:30:10 pm ---and here is chapter 36 at a record hour of the morning!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/245884.html
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Now reading this has cheered me up no end. I wonder what visions poor Wes had going through his mind lol. Is it my imagination or are our boys getting more "mushy" lately? Well good I like it. I think we could all do with some mush right now. Thanks Louise.
xxx
louisev:
and here is an early Sunday update:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/246321.html "Chapter 38"
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