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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 29, 2008, 09:18:16 pm ---and chapter 41, hot off the press!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/247238.html 'Chapter 41'
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SPOILERS
Aww, poor Jeremy. Nothing worse than a head "full a legal shit" I feel his pain. LOL! And poor Nick, too. He's a smart cookie, our Nicky, and he can read his man like a book.
Well, now I really want to smack some sense into both Ellery and Paula. The hell with the plea agreement and Amos Marigold - if their b.s. is getting in the way of our baby boys getting some nookie, then this is really serious! LOL!
“Good. I meant it ta be ambiguous so you’ll think about it.”
I love listening to these two.
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
frantic65:
Chapter 41
Well the rookie is catching crap from all over the place isn't he? Poor Jeremy-his man is feeling a little jealous & neglected & his boss & the ADA have him caught in the middle of their power struggle. He needs to step back, take a deep breath & really take a stand both personally & professionally or he's gonna end up with no man & Ellery's blood pressure problems himself.
I think Nicky just needs some reassuring & loving & then they need to sit down & talk about the reality of being an police officer's partner. It's not a 9-5 job & Jeremy will be bringing the stresses of the job home with him sometimes. (I personally think that Nick just needs to learn that when Jeremy has had a "bad" day at the office, he needs to meet him at the front door with those non-police issue restraints & get his focus back on what's really important! ;))
As far as Paula & Ellery go, well I can't wait for that meeting, but that needs to be where Jeremy makes an impression on those two. (I also thinks Jeremy needs to touch base with his buddy Colson soon, that always makes him feel better)
Geez-I have an awful lot to say about things today, don't I? Too much damn coffee I guess....anyway nice look at Jeremy & Nick adjusting to their life together...looking forward to more!
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 29, 2008, 11:41:48 pm ---
SPOILERS
Aww, poor Jeremy. Nothing worse than a head "full a legal shit" I feel his pain. LOL! And poor Nick, too. He's a smart cookie, our Nicky, and he can read his man like a book.
Well, now I really want to smack some sense into both Ellery and Paula. The hell with the plea agreement and Amos Marigold - if their b.s. is getting in the way of our baby boys getting some nookie, then this is really serious! LOL!
“Good. I meant it ta be ambiguous so you’ll think about it.”
I love listening to these two.
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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You have such a way with words Marie. ::) ;D
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 30, 2008, 12:25:53 pm ---Chapter 41
Well the rookie is catching crap from all over the place isn't he? Poor Jeremy-his man is feeling a little jealous & neglected & his boss & the ADA have him caught in the middle of their power struggle. He needs to step back, take a deep breath & really take a stand both personally & professionally or he's gonna end up with no man & Ellery's blood pressure problems himself.
I think Nicky just needs some reassuring & loving & then they need to sit down & talk about the reality of being an police officer's partner. It's not a 9-5 job & Jeremy will be bringing the stresses of the job home with him sometimes. (I personally think that Nick just needs to learn that when Jeremy has had a "bad" day at the office, he needs to meet him at the front door with those non-police issue restraints & get his focus back on what's really important! ;))
As far as Paula & Ellery go, well I can't wait for that meeting, but that needs to be where Jeremy makes an impression on those two. (I also thinks Jeremy needs to touch base with his buddy Colson soon, that always makes him feel better)
Geez-I have an awful lot to say about things today, don't I? Too much damn coffee I guess....anyway nice look at Jeremy & Nick adjusting to their life together...looking forward to more!
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And you too Fran! ::) ;D
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 29, 2008, 11:41:48 pm ---
SPOILERS
Aww, poor Jeremy. Nothing worse than a head "full a legal shit" I feel his pain. LOL! And poor Nick, too. He's a smart cookie, our Nicky, and he can read his man like a book.
Well, now I really want to smack some sense into both Ellery and Paula. The hell with the plea agreement and Amos Marigold - if their b.s. is getting in the way of our baby boys getting some nookie, then this is really serious! LOL!
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four WHOLE days. In the life of a 24 year old that is interminable!!!
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