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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 30, 2008, 02:22:44 pm ---four WHOLE days. In the life of a 24 year old that is interminable!!!
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Indeed! And we're not talking about just any 24 year old - we're talking about our Naughty Nicky! ;D
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 30, 2008, 12:25:53 pm ---Chapter 41
(I personally think that Nick just needs to learn that when Jeremy has had a "bad" day at the office, he needs to meet him at the front door with those non-police issue restraints & get his focus back on what's really important! ;))
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Like Fabienne, I zeroed in on this, too, Fran! LOL! And, you know I've been thinking about those very retraints (yes, I am that pathetic) ever since Ellery peeked in the toy drawer and the new ones weren't there. Maybe Nicky beat Colson to the store and got the last pair! LOL!
Marie
louisev:
SPOILER
You know, I went home yesterday, determined to see Nicky pounce on our hard working rookie at the door, and lo and behold, Jeremy was too tired! So once more my characters took the plot out of my hands!
frantic65:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 30, 2008, 02:27:07 pm ---Indeed! And we're not talking about just any 24 year old - we're talking about our Naughty Nicky! ;D
Like Fabienne, I zeroed in on this, too, Fran! LOL! And, you know I've been thinking about those very retraints (yes, I am that pathetic) ever since Ellery peeked in the toy drawer and the new ones weren't there. Maybe Nicky beat Colson to the store and got the last pair! LOL!
Marie
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Well I was just thinking that playing with toys 'n stuff like that always calms Ellery down, so it might work for Jeremy too!!! Did you think I was hinting at having Louise write some kinky sex into the story??? ??? ??? ;)
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 30, 2008, 02:58:40 pm ---Well I was just thinking that playing with toys 'n stuff like that always calms Ellery down, so it might work for Jeremy too!!! Did you think I was hinting at having Louise write some kinky sex into the story??? ??? ??? ;)
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Oh my! Perish the thought! ;)
mariez:
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 30, 2008, 02:58:40 pm ---Well I was just thinking that playing with toys 'n stuff like that always calms Ellery down, so it might work for Jeremy too!!! Did you think I was hinting at having Louise write some kinky sex into the story??? ??? ??? ;)
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--- Quote from: belbbmfan on January 30, 2008, 03:20:37 pm ---Oh my! Perish the thought! ;)
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Yes, perish the thought! I'll have you know that I was merely concerned for the small business proprietors in town -just hoping that our boys our doing their part to the keep the economy of Tourmaline moving along by patronizing the local shopkeepers! ;) ;D
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