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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
We had two great chapters today, Louise - you've gone above and beyond the call of duty! LOL!
Now, I have to hop on over to the other thread - looks like you're on a roll!
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
I am indeed.
If there is anything good that can be said to come out of the tragedy of Heath's death and the new focus that Brokeback has received as a result of the notoriety, for me, is to give me another shot in the arm toward the first cut of reworking the rest of the Greenlea stories so that I can offer them to new fans and to those who need to read a positive story of hope for the Ennises of the world.
souxi:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 02, 2008, 04:23:32 pm ---
I understand where you're coming from, souxi :)
But, I actually don't find that part of Ellery charming. And he's isn't quite telling everything like it is. My mouth fell open when I realized he hadn't contacted the D.A.'s office after he spoke with Marigold. To let Paula find out from Marigold's attorney, and then to give that "Oh, any news?" line to Paula at the courthouse? *shakes head* I applaud that he was able to get a plea from Marigold, but he was already pretty darn close to crossing the line, and now he's crossed it. I'm very curious to hear what Wes will have to say - and if Ellery will come clean about exactly what he said to Paula.
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See now I do find that charming. I can,t help it lol. Yes I know maybe his methods are a bit errrrr, different? But hey it got the desired result didn,t it? Miss snooty knickers will get over it lol. As for crossing the line, I can,t help it, I have to forgive him, he reminds me so much of me lol.
Thanks for this Louise. It really is helping to cheer us all up a bit.
Souxi. xx
mariez:
--- Quote from: souxi on February 03, 2008, 05:47:29 am ---...Yes I know maybe his methods are a bit errrrr, different? But hey it got the desired result didn,t it? ...
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I'm not so sure Ellery would agree - I don't think he desired the result of that ass kicking he got from Wes! :laugh: (Or having the case taken out of his hands). But I do agree that Louise is doing a great job of cheering us up!
Marie
mariez:
Top Ten Things Ellery Needs To Do
(In addition to attending the Seminars)
10. Get a subscription to Ms. magazine.
9. Go to the video store and see if there are any old "Maude" episodes
available.
8. Since he doesn't like the whiny voice of the doctor on his meditation tapes,
replace them with the "The Feminine Mystique" book on tape.
7. Make a substantial donation to N.O.W. (bonus points if he actually becomes
a member but I realize that's pushing it).
6. Have Mr. Coyote give him a lickin'.
5. Write another essay. This one entitled, "Women Are Not the Enemy: How
I've Learned to Stop Being an Arrogant Jackass"
4. Make dinner for Edna and serve it to her (bonus points if he wears one of
her aprons).
3. Have Mr. Coyote give him another lickin'.
2. Apologize to Paula and mean it.
1. Make an appointment with Stew and get his Will updated and POAs drawn
up!!!!!!!!!
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