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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 04, 2008, 09:39:33 pm ---okay Souxi, just what you asked for!!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/249600.html 'Chapter 49'
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SPOILERS
Gotta love Mr. Coyote!
“Aw, Colson come on, I was just gettin relaxed.”
“An I’m just gettin a boner, so this’ll work out perfect,” ....
LOL! Good to start the day with a laugh. Hope we get to hear Ellery's "confession" under oath handcuffs. This is some great roll you're on, Louise!
Thanks,
Marie
souxi:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 05, 2008, 08:32:21 am ---
SPOILERS
Gotta love Mr. Coyote!
“Aw, Colson come on, I was just gettin relaxed.”
“An I’m just gettin a boner, so this’ll work out perfect,” ....
LOL! Good to start the day with a laugh. Hope we get to hear Ellery's "confession" under oath handcuffs. This is some great roll you're on, Louise!
Thanks,
Marie
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Yes Marie great idea!! Make him confess whilst restrained with the handcuffs, then if he refuses to tell him anything, he gets more errrrrm "torture" excellent idea lol.
pssst Louise, just make sure Colson has to "force" the truth out of him. :laugh: :laugh:
louisev:
you are just merciless, Souxi - I swear!
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 05, 2008, 01:35:37 pm ---you are just merciless, Souxi - I swear!
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Hahaha I sure am. I,m going to look forward to reading the "torture scene" tomorow morning lol. :laugh: :laugh:
louisev:
unfortunately for you and all of the other folks who seem to be swarming around to read the past week or so, I have to go to a dinner for work tonight. I am hoping to get something written tonight but you might have to hold your breath!!!
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