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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
SPOILER
Unfortunately for Ellery, Wayne has him right where he wants him - feeling responsible!
MaineWriter:
Ah, two chapters, what a treat!
Poor Wayne but more poor Colson, he gave him a scare. And now to have Wayne in the apartment. It seems that everyone in Tourmaline has lived there at one time or another! LOL
L
louisev:
....and here is chapter 55:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/251267.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Well, it's true that having AIDS isn't going to stop Wayne from being......Wayne, and part of being Wayne includes trying to manipulate people whenever he can, and as level-headed Jeremy so neatly put it "....pissin people off. It’s his means a entertainment." I highly doubt if anyone at the bar would take Wayne seriously if he tried to play the "Ellery is in love with me" card, and let's hope he's smart enough not to ever say anything like that in front of Colson! (although past experience shows that Wayne's common sense is frequently on a long lunch break).
I always enjoy watching Ellery, Colson and Jeremy interact - a really interesting combination of personalities, and it's clear how much they all like and respect one another. The dialogue was great, as always. I'd like to see Ellery and Colson get to know Nick better on a social level - hope the four of them can get together for dinner another time.
Funny how Colson was listening so carefully when the conversation turned to Paula.
"....don’t do nothin ta piss her off anymore, Chief.”
Yes, wise words, Jeremy. I'm looking forward to that meeting!
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
better late than never, chapter 56!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/251402.html
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