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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
belbbmfan:
And I'm back!
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Ellery smiled faintly. “I’m glad you got a head on your shoulders, sweetheart.”
“I’ll never forget how upset you were when I went after Worrell that time. I didn’t want ta see ya like that again.”
“Thank you, Colson. That means a lot ta me.”
Exactly! These two are so devouted to each other. Being there for each other in a time of need has been a constant in their relationship. And they both have learned to reign in their temper in doing so, putting the other one first.
Good to see Ellery's always thinking practical. You know, the 'big picture'.
And the girls with Wayne in the apartment? Well, that will be interesting for sure.
Thanks Louise. :)
louisev:
About those rooming arrangements.... Ellery did some thinking about it overnight....
stay tuned!
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 15, 2008, 12:21:41 pm ---
About those rooming arrangements.... Ellery did some thinking about it overnight....
stay tuned!
--- End quote ---
I will. I have an appointment with this thread at 9 am tomorrow morning! ;)
(okay, it might be 10 if our kids let us sleep in. :))
mariez:
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--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 15, 2008, 12:21:41 pm ---
About those rooming arrangements.... Ellery did some thinking about it overnight....
stay tuned!
--- End quote ---
Well, that's a relief.....I think. There are minefields everywhere in this entire, terrible situation. How long can they keep the truth from Laura? I imagine she's going to have to find out eventually....
I keep remembering something Ellery said (I think to Simon) back in one of the Red Stallion chapters - it was after he and Colson had returned from that trip where Ellery developed the rib problem - he told Simon that his worst nightmare would be one of the girls showing up on their doorstep with a black eye and needing their help. Sigh. A lot worse than a black eye, isn't it?
But, Fabienne said it beautifully. Their devotion to each other is a constant. And that, together with Ellery's law enforcement background and his sharp mind will be a great help in the days ahead. Wonderful writing, Louise.
Thanks,
Marie
souxi:
It sure is a hell of a lot worse than a black eye Marie, but just imagine how Colsons rage, which is already at bliling point, will explode if she turns up WITH a black eye, split lip etc. My God he,ll go insane with rage. I shall be on the edge of my seat until tomorow morning Louise. I wonder about her realationship with her mother though. How awful that she feels she can,t tell her. God forbid it that were MY daughter I,d want to know, then I,d go after whoever had done it with a sledgehammer. >:(
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