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MaineWriter:

--- Quote from: mariez on February 16, 2008, 12:33:43 am ---Hmmm....Brokeback Mountain?  Yes, sounds vaguely familiar... LOL!  Enjoy!

Marie

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On the big screen and in English no less!

L

louisev:
and it is morning and here is the next chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/253129.html

so my duties are done and I am free to enjoy the Heath Ledger DVD Festival coming up in a few minutes, then head down to Santa Cruz for a Brokie dinner and Brokeback on the big screen!

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 16, 2008, 02:37:27 pm ---and it is morning and here is the next chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/253129.html

so my duties are done and I am free to enjoy the Heath Ledger DVD Festival coming up in a few minutes, then head down to Santa Cruz for a Brokie dinner and Brokeback on the big screen!

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You're missing Chapter 59 now, Louise! LOL!  When you corrected the numbering last night, 59 and 60 got reversed.  So, 60 should be 59, 61 should be 60 and 62 should be 61 - clear as mud?  Now, on to the important things ..... I'm envious - there ain't nothing like Brokeback Mountain on the big screen!

SPOILERS




With all of Ellery's money they can keep their house and have a farm! And he can keep his job.  And they can build a nice little guest cottage on the farm for the girls - so Ellery and Colson can have all the privacy they need!   ;D Money may not buy happiness but it sure makes things a hell of a lot easier! LOL!

I love funny Jeremy.  And it cracks me up that Ellery is pouting at Colson's and Jeremy's skepticism - “I can too buy a farm!”      :laugh:

But I'm worried about Pam (and Colson)...and anxious for the girls to get there!  I'm loving this, Louise!

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
damn! numbers are just eluding me today!!!

At least I got the thing written and they are all in order, NEVER MIND THE NUMBERS!!!

MaineWriter:
Ellery buying a farm...and everyone teasing him...LOL

But on the other hand, he is married man now, with a family. Maybe it is time to move out of his one bedroom, one bath bachelor pad. He may be thinking more clearly than anyone realizes.

And remember one of Ellery's most famous lines..."Homemade baked goods just slide down my throat..." Having Katie Ann and Pam nearby might be a very good idea, especially since he is supposed to gain a few pounds.

L

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