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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
new chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/254109.html 'Chapter 64'
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 20, 2008, 09:42:07 pm ---new chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/254109.html 'Chapter 64'
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Well, Pam is not the only one who's happy that Ellery is there. I am too. I hope now that Colson has seen that Pam is 'the same' (on the surface at least) he'll be able to calm down a bit. I know he was sick with worry, but I understand that Pam doesn't want people to treat her differently now. On first impressions she seems to doing well, considering the awful circumstances.
I loved it when Pam said that about Ellery being the police chief in the family. :) Ellery must have been pleased to hear that. And yeah, she was right to get out of there. And what's with this guy being able to get away? Are the Tourmaline police force the only ones who can catch the bad guys? It looks like Wes will get involved pretty soon.
And I can't believe how Pam's mother is treating her. Being a mother myself, it's incomprehensible :(
I'm glad the girls have arrived safely Louise. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Thanks!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 20, 2008, 12:03:10 am ---This might be the funniest chapter I ever wrote.
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I just read that last night, Louise and you're right - it's hilarious! And speaking of funny - I have to bring up the ultimate "Wayne" line I also read recently: "What was I gonna say, NO?" OMG, that only gets funnier with time! :laugh:
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--- Quote from: belbbmfan on February 21, 2008, 02:53:34 am ---I loved it when Pam said that about Ellery being the police chief in the family. :)
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And I can't believe how Pam's mother is treating her. Being a mother myself, it's incomprehensible :(
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Me, too, Fabienne - on both counts! "Step-dad" Ellery hit just the right tone with the girls on a personal level and "Chief Deputy" Ellery is going to be of immeasurable assistance on the law enforcement level.
As for Laura - ugh. What a vile and repugnant attitude. I don't even want to get started ..... >:( Thank God for Colson and Ellery.
Looking forward, as always - thanks, Louise!
Marie
souxi:
Well I,m off for the night now. I shall look eagerly for my update in the morning. I hope that when Colson talks to Laura he gives her a piece of his mind. Pam is her daughter for Gods sake. Horrible woman. >:( She,d better change her attitude fast or I,ll get my bombs out again. Remember the one I dropped on Bunny Ruskin Louise? :laugh:
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 21, 2008, 08:39:10 am --- "What was I gonna say, NO?" OMG, that only gets funnier with time! :laugh:
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:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
That must be one of the funniest lines you've written Louise.
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