Could be. I haven't analysed the story as much as the movie. The movie breaks my heart but the story breaks my heart and fills me with grief. Ennis dreaming about Jack is what does it. ("sometimes the pillow was wet, sometimes the sheet...")
That line is a killer!! It makes me sad every time I read it.
I have a slightly different interpretation of Lureen's phone conversation with Ennis. I don't think Lureen and Jack loved each other. I think they got together because they were both high from winning at the rodeo and wanted to celebrate. Jack's decision to be with Lureen IMO was motivated by her money and his loneliness at not being with Ennis. Plus the pregancy brought them together.
I don’t think I can agree with you 100%. I see your POV. However, IMO, Lureen thought she really loved Jack and she thought Jack loved her. Jack’s decision to be with Lureen was motivated by fear, societal mores and yes, IMO, her money and standing. As for her pregnancy … we can only surmise she was pregnant prior to their marriage. I, for one, believe that is what happened. However, there could be a strong argument for Lureen’s pregnancy to have occurred shortly after they were married (as what happened with Ennis and Alma).
I think Lureen's tears were caused from a look back at her life with Jack. Their marriage was so passionless and routine they could "do it over the phone." Lureen was more interested in money than love. She could have had a better more loving life with Jack but didn't. When she talks to Ennis she realizes the love she wanted from Jack was given to Ennis instead of her. Movie Lureen says, "Get in touch with his folks. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out. About the ashes, I mean." The paragraph from the story is, "[Jack's parents] will be [in Lightnin Flat] until they die. I never met them. They didn't come down for the funeral. You get in touch with them. I suppose they'd appreciate it if his wishes was carried out."
I don’t think Lureen initially was more interested in money than in love. Very quickly, however, she realized that their marriage was one of convenience and not love. The more their life went on status quo, the more she threw herself into the business. She became more and more bitter as time went on. I think she suspected something wasn’t right for years. Whether or not she knew he was gay (before the phone call) is debatable. I do think, however, she was devastated to realize that her husband’s lover was on the end of the phone (I am skipping a couple of lines, but you get the point
Lureen: He used to say he wanted his ashes to be scattered on Brokeback Mountain, but I wasn’t sure where that was ……
Ennis: No, ma’am, we herded sheep up on Brokeback one summer … back in ‘63”
Lureen: Well, he said it was his favorite place. I thought he meant to get drunk ….
This exchange, IMO, means two things. First, that Jack loved this man way before she met Jack. Secondly, Jack’s favorite place, where she thought he liked to go to get drunk, was really the place where he met this man … the man on the end of the line.
But I'm still not sure why Lureen says, About the ashes I mean. She's clarifying she's talking about the ashes, but what else could she be referring to?
That line stumps me, too. (Unless she means that Jack’s wishes were really to be with this man on the end of the line … ?? I haven’t a clue).