Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3734613 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2620 on: February 24, 2007, 01:23:34 pm »
Shall I start a new one?  ;)


He sat by the window, drinking beer after beer


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2621 on: February 24, 2007, 01:53:15 pm »

He sat by the window, drinking beer after beer,
Waiting for the moment when Jack would reappear

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2622 on: February 25, 2007, 06:40:33 am »
He sat by the window, drinking beer after beer,
Waiting for the moment when Jack would reappear.
Tension mounting by the minute,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2623 on: February 25, 2007, 11:52:31 am »
He sat by the window, drinking beer after beer,
Waiting for the moment when Jack would reappear.
Tension mounting by the minute,
Excitement building, but trying to limit,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2624 on: February 25, 2007, 02:52:06 pm »
He sat by the window, drinking beer after beer,
Waiting for the moment when Jack would reappear.
Tension mounting by the minute,
Excitement building, but trying to limit,
'til raw passion beat back his fear!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2625 on: February 25, 2007, 03:03:52 pm »
He ran into that fast hard embrace

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2626 on: February 25, 2007, 05:03:15 pm »
He ran into that fast hard embrace
A wide, happy smile lighting up his face 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2627 on: February 25, 2007, 06:09:36 pm »
I love these poems about the reunion.....................


He ran into that fast hard embrace
A wide, happy smile lighting up his face 
Pressing together, fast and hard,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2628 on: February 25, 2007, 06:36:55 pm »
He ran into that fast hard embrace
A wide, happy smile lighting up his face 
Pressing together, fast and hard,
Jack holding back at first till Ennis played his card

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2629 on: February 25, 2007, 10:30:22 pm »
He ran into that fast hard embrace
A wide, happy smile lighting up his face 
Pressing together, fast and hard,
Jack holding back at first till Ennis played his card
Kissing and hugging at such a fast pace.


The kiss, not expected, was joy to Jacks heart,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection