Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3344884 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3060 on: September 18, 2007, 04:11:01 pm »




       Jack was gone, and Ennis whispered I swear.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3061 on: September 19, 2007, 06:51:37 am »
Jack was gone, and Ennis whispered I swear
For both Ennis and Jack, life sometimes is unfair


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3062 on: September 19, 2007, 06:00:35 pm »



    Jack was gone, and Ennis whispered I swear
    For both Ennis and Jack, life sometimes is unfair
    They wander and wonder if life together is desired



     
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3063 on: September 22, 2007, 11:39:41 pm »
  Jack was gone, and Ennis whispered I swear
    For both Ennis and Jack, life sometimes is unfair
    They wander and wonder if life together is desired
    Their life a turmoil since to Aguirre they hired





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3064 on: September 23, 2007, 06:27:05 pm »
Jack was gone, and Ennis whispered I swear
For both Ennis and Jack, life sometimes is unfair
They wander and wonder if life together is desired
Their life a turmoil since to Aguirre they hired
So they just struggle on in despair.

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What about a funny one for a change?  :P

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3065 on: September 23, 2007, 06:29:16 pm »
Four hours each day Jack commuted

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3066 on: September 23, 2007, 07:52:49 pm »




   Four hours each day Jack commuted 
   That his job was hard Ennis never disputed
 
 


     



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3067 on: September 24, 2007, 09:53:20 pm »
Four hours each day Jack commuted
That his job was hard Ennis never disputed
They did a switch-a-roo


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3068 on: September 24, 2007, 10:22:44 pm »



Four hours each day Jack commuted
That his job was hard Ennis never disputed
They did a switch-a-roo
Jack used  the opener too



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3069 on: September 25, 2007, 08:45:03 am »
Four hours each day Jack commuted
That his job was hard Ennis never disputed
They did a switch-a-roo
Jack used  the opener too
and soon both their lives were uprooted


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!