Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

More last line ideas:

Hot Jack-love he hoped to acquire
Ridding Jack of his cowboy attire
And hot man-love soon would transpire
And to the tent they would retire
Adoring his fine blue-clad squire
And hot love-flames burned ever higher
With Jack, he was quite the live wire
While owls and bugs formed a night choir
His hot love-gun would not misfire!

 

Hehe...
And each one a classic, LauraG...

[ifyoucantfixit]

       That was great Laura....
   

     New one

      Dreaming of Jack was a joy and a menace.

[Delmardeb]

Dreaming of Jack was a joy and a menace
Which was experienced by his only love Ennis

[LauraGigs]

Dreaming of Jack was a joy and a menace
Which was experienced by his only love Ennis
He'd hear the wind blow

[Lumière]

Dreaming of Jack was a joy and a menace
Which was experienced by his only love Ennis
He'd hear the wind blow
And off his mind would go

[ifyoucantfixit]

Dreaming of Jack was a joy and a menace
Which was experienced by his only love Ennis
He'd hear the wind blow
And off his mind would go
He held onto everlasting love with a vengence

[Lumière]

New one: 


Aguirre watched them make love in the sun

[Delmardeb]

Aguirre watched them make love in the sun
He nosily watched them until they were done

[LauraGigs]

Aguirre watched them make love in the sun
He nosily watched them until they were done
His binocs got foggy

[Pipedream]

Aguirre watched them make love in the sun
He nosily watched them until they were done
His binocs got foggy
His underpants soggy