Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

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There was once an ol' bear named Bill
Who found young cubs would bend to his will:
Up on Brokeback they'd lurk
While Ennis and Jack did the work

[Mikaela]

There was once an ol' bear named Bill
Who found young cubs would bend to his will:
Up on Brokeback they'd lurk
While Ennis and Jack did the work
to bring back tales of late-night tent thrills! 

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         Jack said, "your folks run you off?"

[Pipedream]

Jack said, "your folks run you off?"
"No", said Ennis and suppressed a cough.

[ifyoucantfixit]

Jack said, "your folks run you off?"
"No", said Ennis and suppressed a cough
Care if I borrow the lighter?

[Lumière]

Jack said, "your folks run you off?"
"No", said Ennis and suppressed a cough,
"Care if I borrow the lighter?"
Jack's eyes shone brighter,

[Pipedream]

Jack said, "your folks run you off?"
"No", said Ennis and suppressed a cough,
"Care if I borrow the lighter?"
Jack's eyes shone brighter,
He knew he was falling in love.

 

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       Ennis said, Jack was a real thinker?

[Lumière]

Pardon me for tweaking your sentence, Janice ..but I was getting nowhere trying to find a good rhyme for 'thinker'...   


Jack was a real thinker, Ennis said.
Jack frowned and shook his head

[ifyoucantfixit]

    No worries.  I dont mind a bit.

    Jack was a real thinker, Ennis said.
    Jack frowned and shook his head
    Ennis worried people knew he was gay!