Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3671582 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3230 on: November 20, 2007, 03:24:03 am »
Jack watched him drive away that day
His spirit broken, he gazed away.
"Let be," he thought with a sigh. "Let be."
I know one day, he will come to me.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3231 on: November 20, 2007, 03:40:41 am »



Jack watched him drive away that day
His spirit broken, he gazed away.
"Let be," he thought with a sigh. "Let be."
I know one day, he will come to me.
Never enough time, for that great manque.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3232 on: November 20, 2007, 07:16:02 pm »

Jack carved the turkey with a frown


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3233 on: November 20, 2007, 08:51:56 pm »



Jack carved the turkey with a frown.
He had threatened to beat old LD down.

         



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3234 on: November 21, 2007, 07:52:07 pm »
Jack carved the turkey with a frown.
He had threatened to beat old LD down.
But Lureen hid a grin

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3235 on: November 22, 2007, 12:23:27 am »




Jack carved the turkey with a frown.
He had threatened to beat old LD down.
But Lureen hid a grin
Let the dinner begin



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3236 on: November 22, 2007, 03:21:22 am »
Jack carved the turkey with a frown.
He had threatened to beat old LD down.
But Lureen hid a grin
Let the dinner begin
thinking Jack's meek-mild cover was blown!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3237 on: November 22, 2007, 03:25:45 am »
Another Thanksgiving one?



Monroe loved his electric new knife

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3238 on: November 22, 2007, 04:04:36 am »
Monroe loved his electric new knife
It saved him turkey carving strife



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3239 on: November 22, 2007, 06:16:55 am »
Monroe loved his electric new knife
It saved him turkey carving strife
Ennis wasn't impressed