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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3380 on: December 16, 2007, 07:11:11 pm »



He pitched the tent, but it didnt look right
Jack said leave it be, I ain't goin nowhers,. tonight



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3381 on: December 17, 2007, 11:46:51 pm »
He pitched the tent, but it didnt look right
Jack said leave it be, I ain't goin nowhers,. tonight
Ennis looked over at Jack as he was playing a tune


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3382 on: December 18, 2007, 12:33:25 am »
He pitched the tent, but it didnt look right
Jack said leave it be, I ain't goin nowhers,. tonight
Ennis looked over at Jack as he was playing a tune
Thoughts of making love to him soon
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3383 on: December 18, 2007, 07:07:28 am »



He pitched the tent, but it didnt look right
Jack said leave it be, I ain't goin nowhers,. tonight
Ennis looked over at Jack as he was playing a tune
Thoughts of making love to him soon
He then came inside, to Jacks great delight.
 



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3384 on: December 18, 2007, 07:35:31 am »
Hat in hand, he knelt before him
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3385 on: December 18, 2007, 08:44:09 am »



Hat in hand, he knelt before him
The firelight being rather dim.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3386 on: December 18, 2007, 12:57:03 pm »
Hat in hand, he knelt before him
The firelight being rather dim.
He kept his eyes low,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3387 on: December 18, 2007, 05:54:10 pm »
Hat in hand, he knelt before him
The firelight being rather dim.
He kept his eyes low,
needing Jack to go slow

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3388 on: December 18, 2007, 06:10:05 pm »


Hat in hand, he knelt before him
The firelight being rather dim.
He kept his eyes low,
needing Jack to go slow
Then filling his cup to the brim.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3389 on: December 18, 2007, 06:11:41 pm »
Oh, very nice!   :) Bravo!