Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3355154 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5200 on: November 11, 2009, 12:57:20 pm »
November the seventh came and went
Ennis got back the postcard he'd sent,
Made one phone call
What he heard was bitter as gall
His pain and regret would never be spent
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5201 on: November 11, 2009, 01:43:34 pm »
Aaaahh, so sad Mariez  :(


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5202 on: November 11, 2009, 03:46:43 pm »
what's a buckknife?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5203 on: November 11, 2009, 04:14:23 pm »
what's a buckknife?

http://www.buckknives.com

It's a brand of knife...straight or serrated blades, or the kind I think of as 'jack-knives' that fold...that seems the type Jack is using to open the can of beans.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5204 on: November 11, 2009, 04:22:05 pm »
Thanks Lynne!  :-*

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5205 on: November 11, 2009, 04:26:47 pm »
Jack wielded the buckknife as if it were a sword,
"Be careful with that!" Ennis ducked and roared

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5206 on: November 11, 2009, 05:01:17 pm »
Jack wielded the buckknife as if it were a sword,
"Be careful with that!" Ennis ducked and roared
"Look at me!  I'm Dastan!"
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5207 on: November 11, 2009, 09:10:13 pm »
Jack wielded the buckknife as if it were a sword,
"Be careful with that!" Ennis ducked and roared
"Look at me!  I'm Dastan!
"With a fake British accent"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5208 on: November 12, 2009, 09:14:19 am »
Jack wielded the buckknife as if it were a sword,
"Be careful with that!" Ennis ducked and roared
"Look at me!  I'm Dastan!"
"With a fake British accent"
But he sounded better than Madonna, that wannabe bird*!"





* 'bird' is British slang for a female.  These limericks are so educational!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5209 on: November 12, 2009, 03:58:22 pm »
That limerick is pretty weird.....  :-\


 ;)



And Donna, your explanation gives food for thought on the difference between American and British English.

I'm thinking in the direction of "pretty tough old birds..."

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