Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3354618 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5460 on: December 14, 2009, 10:43:25 pm »




In Jack's old room, Ennis found something unexpected
We may ask:  Were they meant to be detected?
If Jack were still alive, it may have been his greatest wish
Wanting Ennis to discover his love, and his personal fetish.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5461 on: December 15, 2009, 02:50:43 pm »
In Jack's old room, Ennis found something unexpected
We may ask:  Were they meant to be detected?
If Jack were still alive, it may have been his greatest wish
Wanting Ennis to discover his love, and his personal fetish
But when he found them, the shirts had been sadly neglected

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5462 on: December 15, 2009, 02:53:34 pm »
For Donna    :-*


Being a mod is a lot of hard work
Much more so than just to sit around and lurk
But maybe sometimes a mod can spare the time
to write a limerick or come up with a rhyme
Coz only work and no fun makes people go berserk

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5463 on: December 15, 2009, 02:55:08 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5464 on: December 15, 2009, 05:50:25 pm »
For Donna    :-*


Being a mod is a lot of hard work
Much more so than just to sit around and lurk
But maybe sometimes a mod can spare the time
to write a limerick or come up with a rhyme
Coz only work and no fun makes people go berserk

 :laugh:

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A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5465 on: December 15, 2009, 05:52:53 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count,
Told the boys they sucked at sheepherding while up on the mount,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5466 on: December 15, 2009, 06:13:31 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count,
Told the boys they sucked at sheepherding while up on the mount,
But at stemmin the rose
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5467 on: December 15, 2009, 06:34:28 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count,
Told the boys they sucked at sheepherding while up on the mount,
But at stemmin the rose
they were experts we suppose

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5468 on: December 15, 2009, 06:44:22 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count,
Told the boys they sucked at sheepherding while up on the mount,
But at stemmin the rose
they were experts we suppose
To have been able to watch we would have paid any amount

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5469 on: December 15, 2009, 07:31:42 pm »
When they came down from the mountain Aguirre wasn't happy with the count,
Told the boys they sucked at sheepherding while up on the mount,
But at stemmin the rose
they were experts we suppose
To have been able to watch we would have paid any amount

That's cool.

(And the meter is almost right...) :-X