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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
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I don't know which I love more - a wet, naked and horny Ellery or a nervous, blushing and horny Mr. Coyote! :) I'll take them both.
“We’re ... all set. Know how ta turn down the bed an all that.”
LOL! Can't argue with that. Terrific dialogue, as always, Louise, and having Colson in California is inspired!
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
I hope that you all like it... I had to get away from all of those murders and court procedures and such and get back to what really counts... the actual drama of the Wrangler and the Lawman.
belbbmfan:
Yeah, I love it! Although when I first read the title, I thought they were heading out east. LOL. I didn't know about 'the land of the lotus eaters'.
And what's a Tesla coil? ???
I love Ellery giving Wes a call before they take off. I remember Ellery being shocked when Colson told him about Wes and Edna regarding him a their son, but he enjoys a bit of daddying now and again, even though he'll probably never admit it. It's nice to see Ellery seeking a bit of reassurance from Wes.
And Wes, well, what can I say? I love Wes!!
“Have fun boy. Just don’t gimme the details.” :laugh:
How wonderful that Wes and Edna have invited Nick and Jeremy to do the sunday roast. I'm already looking forward to both of them riding with the Grey girls. ;D
--- Quote from: mariez on September 22, 2008, 07:48:27 am ---
I don't know which I love more - a wet, naked and horny Ellery or a nervous, blushing and horny Mr. Coyote! :) I'll take them both.
--- End quote ---
hmmm, I hear you Marie. It's an impossible choice. :P
What a great start Louise! More please. :D
Dank u wel!!
louisev:
here is a Tesla coil, invented of course by Nikola Tesla:
It generates static electricity. LOTS of static electricity.
louisev:
and here is chapter 4!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/276576.html
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