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Fantasy Scenes
jpwagoneer1964:
Jack thinking:
Ennis...Ennis please don't go, not just yet, punch don't mean nuthin', just stay a while with me.....please
jpwagoneer1964:
Jack thinking: Wonder if Ennis is comin' the tent, didn't seem ta mind much that I came up ta see 'm on the mountain, just sat up there right next ta me mostly till it was time ta come back ta camp 'n make ourselves supper. Didn't say hardly anything, stayed real close though. Still out there, looks kinda scared, 's alright Ennis it'll be ok, just us, me and you, don't need ta be afraid
jpwagoneer1964:
Enis thinking:
I'm real scared Jack. Sure wanna be in here next ta you, wouldn't do this if it weren't fer ya Jack....Jack I'm real sorry I left ya this morninig with hardly a word, just all confused an mixed up, didn't mean ta hurt ya none...
Jack thinking:
Ennis you came in...your really here...I know how much it means that your in here with me. I know how afraid you are but it's you and me, us bud, together. 'S alright, s 'alright be ok, always be
jpwagoneer1964:
Jack thinking:
Damn! This just didn't go the way I figured it. Gonna be just as lonely with Ennis up with the sheep an I'm down here. Wanted we should be both sleepin' down here at camp.
malina:
--- Quote from: jpwagoneer1964 on July 27, 2006, 02:08:05 am --- " S'alright, s'alright........shhhhh..... damn you Ennis....go ahead and bawl, s'alright....ain't lettin' ya go, hang on to me tight..... stay in my arms as long as ya want....ain't leaving till your ready, it's ok, I ain't going nowhere....shhhh.....s'alright........nobody here but us bud...."
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JPWagoneer, bless you for coming up with this. I have been slowly digesting this entire wonderful thread and this one (it goes with a shot from the end of the lake fight scene) just stops me in my tracks every time. I think that scene is miraculous, but since I first saw it I had a need - it actually feels like a need, not a wish - to have Jack go that little bit further in his comforting of Ennis. Ennis is coming apart at the seams. He is having the emotional meltdown of his life, percipitated by his feelings for Jack, and the only way he can move from this crisis point/ moment of reckoning is if Jack helps him through it. Your lines ring true and make me just that little bit surer of Jack's absolute support and love... this is beautiful, really beautiful.
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