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Fantasy Scenes
mvansand76:
My additional scenes would be:
1. One more scene on the mountain after the second tent scene, showing them just talking or a scene that shows how much everything is right for them at that moment, something like the campfire embrace, just leaning into each other and talking.
2. Ennis coming home to Alma after BBM. I want to write that scene.
3. The WHOLE motel scene (duh) or the scene at the diner before they leave for the mountains. Lovely. But to be honest, I do think that the motel scene works perfectly as it is.
4. Their last camping trip (they talk they had about their kids, the "that's one of the two things I need right now...", I LOVE that in the book).
And you know what, just more of them together in the whole movie, I think somebody once suggested to just skip all the Cassie scenes, all the Monroe scenes, all the Randall scenes and replace them with Jack and Ennis scenes. That would've worked fine by me! ;D
nic:
--- Quote from: mvansand76 on July 04, 2006, 07:25:56 am ---My additional scenes would be:
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2. Ennis coming home to Alma after BBM. I want to write that scene.
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Hmm, sounds like you may have a fan fic waiting to be written? Be sure to let us know if you write something!
A lot of my fantasy scenes have been realised by some of the incredible BBM fan fic stories around that fill in the gaps we didn't see. It's different to seeing it on screen of course. However, some I've found as moving and some more moving.
There's also been several things I've read that if I'd thought of, I'd certainly have been fantasising about! ;)
Mikaela:
--- Quote from: latjoreme on June 26, 2006, 03:47:33 am --- ........ he strokes Jack's face and looks at him in this sort of slightly pained heavy-breathing besotted way (the way you look at somebody when your knees feel weak)... his face really close ... and then ... the nuzzle ... !!!!
...That moment lasted about 5/8ths of a second, and I could have used a LOT more of that sort of thing. Would it have killed them? Would it have really undercut the "never enough time" message all that much? They could add an hour and a half of loving looks and nuzzles and affectionate caresses and it still wouldn't be enough time, in my book. (Please, Director's Cut, please please please!!!)
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Better late than never: I just need to say that there are no words to express just how much I agree with the above. (As long as that hour and a half also included a sufficient ratio of hot 'n tender kisses, of course. )
Luvlylittlewing:
I would love to see a scene of the boys all dressed up, Jack the darker one in a black Armani suit, Ennis in a creme colored Brooks Brothers suit. Both are hatless and they walk into a banquet hand in hand. As soon as they enter the crowded hall, all talk stops! Next image the two boys sitting side by side, Jack playing with the curls on the nape of Ennis' neck. Ennis traces Jack's jawline with a finger, seductively whispers into his husband's ear. ::)
Okay, I know this could never happen in Jack and Ennis' world, but somehow this image of the two of them being able to be seen in public, be affectionate, always haunts me. This is my fantasy for the two of them - a scene I would love to see. :)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: atz75 on June 26, 2006, 07:49:21 pm ---
(1) That great "Ode to the Nuzzle" thread is in the archives. Yeehaw! It really is/was a lovely thread.
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That's so funny, I think that's the one I started on imdb.com!
hee hee hee! :D
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