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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Helen:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 11, 2006, 11:38:08 am ---I ain't tellin. That'd give it all away. Leslie will tell you that I was online and in heavy discussion with her and Judy earlier today before I posted this, and they made some very helpful suggestions. I was quite concerned that this chapter might freak out you the reader... but so far all I have heard is thuds.
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Ok, I need to move on from Chapter 40 PDQ! :)
louisev:
Thanks Fred, have another!
Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/71056.html "Chapter 79: Tender Moments"
louisev:
--- Quote from: Helen on July 11, 2006, 03:06:34 pm ---Ok, I need to move on from Chapter 40 PDQ! :)
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Helen, we are in the Fanfiction chat! I hope you will come and visit!!!
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 11, 2006, 03:07:07 pm ---Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/71056.html "Chapter 79: Tender Moments"
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Possible SPOILERS ...
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Louise, the last few chapters have been amazing!
Chapter 79 was just so special ...
I loved their little commitment ceremony, and to think that Ennis initiated it! :D
As I read their vows to each other, I was reminded of the scene in A Love Borne from Steel by our very own Leslie here, where Jack and Ennis were at the fair in Quanah and decided to buy each other rings, putting it on each other's hands and saying simply: "That's it". Seems very simple, but to them, it was like a wedding!
With Ennis saying: “To us. You belongin ta me, an me belongin ta you.” and Ellery replying: “To me belongin ta you, an you belongin ta me,” - they have essentially wed in my eyes!
Here's a toast to E & E: :-*
louisev:
Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/71371.html "Chapter 80: Boss"
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