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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
ok guys here is our full and complete description of LAUREN:
“You gettin a new bartender?” came the soft voice of the lanky assistant, holding his broom as if to ward off danger with it.
soft voiced, lanky. Now ... the field is open, and we can dispense with the scrawnies.
Jane:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 13, 2006, 12:33:24 pm ---WHAT? You guys didn't have enough? Yesterday's sex wore off already?
I think Ennis agrees with you.
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Of course we havnt had enough sex, have we? Just ask Leslie what happened when we discovered she wasnt going to do a christening the bed scene!!! She did of course in the end, and it was well worth it I might add. ;) Is Ennis going to try out the erm, ahem, you know, ermmmmmmm, "toys" that Ellery keeps in his bottom drawer? ;) ;) ;) ;)
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: Jane on July 13, 2006, 01:03:12 pm ---Of course we havnt had enough sex, have we?
--- End quote ---
Nope, not by a long shot ;D
Look forward to some more 'nipping' :P
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 13, 2006, 12:34:12 pm ---ok guys here is our full and complete description of LAUREN:
'You gettin a new bartender?' came the soft voice of the lanky assistant, holding his broom as if to ward off danger with it. soft voiced, lanky. Now ... the field is open, and we can dispense with the scrawnies.
--- End quote ---
I still vote for him! ;)
Helen:
I'm with Lucise :)
You just can't have every guy in your story being skinny...
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