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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
neatfreak:
Wait, wait. Lemme get this straight, Leslie: "A Love Born From Steel" is the first writing you've done?
Jane:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 15, 2006, 07:33:12 am ---okay okay I'm awake now. Left with the wreckage of the weekend here.... not my weekend, but the boys' weekend. I have the first part of Saturday written and working on... YES! The SEX SCENE.
For those who are up and about at last (it's afternoon in Europe) I will be hanging in chat while I separate those Shelayan weekend days outta ours!
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Hi Louise. Erm I know(I think) I,ve asked this before, but as you,ve mentioned, SEX,(NOT that we ladies are sex mad or anything are we? ;) )I just kind of erm, (cough) wondered,like you do, ;), is Ennis likely to try out any of the erm, ahem, "toys" that Ellery keeps in the bottom drawer in the bedroom? ;) ;) btw I LOVED the bit where Edna asked Ennis if he wanted butter on his biscuits... brilliant. :laugh:
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: neatfreak on July 15, 2006, 07:56:24 am ---Wait, wait. Lemme get this straight, Leslie: "A Love Born From Steel" is the first writing you've done?
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Well, I do alot of writing as part of my job, but it is not fiction! But the mechanics of writing are very comfortable for me.
In terms of my progression to fiction, the first thing I wrote was, "Brokeback Fever: A New Clinical Entity," which is sort of cross between my usual technical writing and fiction.
Then I wrote, "Makin' It Legal" which hasn't been posted anywhere, but if anyone wants to read it, let me know, I'll send you a copy. It is actually a chapter that builds on Human Interest, with Jack and Ennis in Vermont. Takes place in 2004.
Then I wrote "A Love Born From Steel."
That is my entire fiction writing career, launched in the past five months.
Leslie
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 15, 2006, 07:38:02 am ---He didnt get in touch with Ennis again until he had had a few years of pounding the rodeo trail, while Ennis wondered what happened to him.
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Correct me if I'm wrong (I dont have a copy of the story anymore) but didn't Jack go back to Sage to see Aguirre a year later just like in the movie? Ennis was very much on his mind as he asked about him.
And for that matter, the anti-climatic way they parted sure would have left doubt in Jacks eyes as to Ennis's fealings on the matter. Especially when the man you love just punched you out, then the last words he says t oyou are that he's still getting married. I'm surprized that Jack didn't drive away in major tears!
louisev:
--- Quote from: Jane on July 15, 2006, 08:07:12 am ---Hi Louise. Erm I know(I think) I,ve asked this before, but as you,ve mentioned, SEX,(NOT that we ladies are sex mad or anything are we? ;) )I just kind of erm, (cough) wondered,like you do, ;), is Ennis likely to try out any of the erm, ahem, "toys" that Ellery keeps in the bottom drawer in the bedroom? ;) ;) btw I LOVED the bit where Edna asked Ennis if he wanted butter on his biscuits... brilliant. :laugh:
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errr... did you miss the chapters with all the props pictured in the gallery? that's pretty much all of what's in the toy drawer! Or did you mean is he going to try on a cock ring or buttplug himself?
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