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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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Jane:
Or did you mean is he going to try on a cock ring or buttplug himself?

Yes Louise that is exactly what I meant.  I,ve seen the pic gallery with all their erm "toys" in it, thats why I wondered if Ennis was going to try them out too. I know he,s experienced the vibrator but not the cock ring or the buttplug..... yet. ;) ;) ;)

louisev:

--- Quote from: neatfreak on July 15, 2006, 08:37:15 am ---Whoa. Both of you ladies -- Leslie and Louise -- just astound me with your skills at examining the human condition within the constraints of our favorite story. I am humbled at your abilities to show the intricacies of emotional upheaval and relationships with our guys. Wow.

I write curriculum for a living, and I've written procedural manuals; basically, it's writing directions -- something perfect for an anal-retentive like me. And both of you have similar professional careers, it sounds like. But I could no more write convincing fiction like you than I could shear one o' those stinkin' sheep. A tip o' the hat to you, Leslie and Louise. Here's to more excellent storytelling from both of you.

Speaking of which: Louise, we're all waiting for that sex scene! What are you doing here?!

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I am resequencing chapters and writing in a weekend.  I am working on a Saturday afternoon sex scene.  Chapters 87 and 88 will be pushed to Monday and there will be intervening chapters.

Still working on resequencing.

Helen:

--- Quote from: louisev on July 15, 2006, 07:33:12 am ---okay okay I'm awake now.  Left with the wreckage of the weekend here.... not my weekend, but the boys' weekend.  I have the first part of Saturday written and working on... YES! The SEX SCENE.

For those who are up and about at last (it's afternoon in Europe) I will be hanging in chat while I separate those Shelayan weekend days outta ours!

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Oh you know, my heart gave a tiny leap here....I thought you were talking about the drabbles....    :-\

louisev:

--- Quote from: Jane on July 15, 2006, 08:40:28 am ---Or did you mean is he going to try on a cock ring or buttplug himself?

Yes Louise that is exactly what I meant.  I,ve seen the pic gallery with all their erm "toys" in it, thats why I wondered if Ennis was going to try them out too. I know he,s experienced the vibrator but not the cock ring or the buttplug..... yet. ;) ;) ;)

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oh. OH!!!! well I guess we're going to have to find out.  Right now I am working on Ennis being pleasured and he is having a real hard time holding still!

MaineWriter:

--- Quote from: neatfreak on July 15, 2006, 08:37:15 am ---Whoa. Both of you ladies -- Leslie and Louise -- just astound me with your skills at examining the human condition within the constraints of our favorite story. I am humbled at your abilities to show the intricacies of emotional upheaval and relationships with our guys. Wow.

I write curriculum for a living, and I've written procedural manuals; basically, it's writing directions -- something perfect for an anal-retentive like me. And both of you have similar professional careers, it sounds like. But I could no more write convincing fiction like you than I could shear one o' those stinkin' sheep. A tip o' the hat to you, Leslie and Louise. Here's to more excellent storytelling from both of you.

Speaking of which: Louise, we're all waiting for that sex scene! What are you doing here?!

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Neat,

Thanks for those very kind words. I appreciate it!

Actually, I think Louise and I have fairly different careers. She'll fill you in on what she does (software something-or-other). I am a nurse but my career has been mostly in research and academia. I am the editor of two journals, do a lot of consulting on research and statistics. I am bored with a lot of it to be honest, right now, which is probably why the fanfic bug has bitten me so hard. Cliniically, I keep up on things (a little bit) by working at a free clinic here in Portland. I also read alot.

Leslie

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