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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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louisev:
Update to "A Second Chance"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/60306.html  "Chapter 39:  Needing It"

This is what I call a stunt chapter.

JennyC:

--- Quote from: MaineWriter on June 26, 2006, 01:32:55 pm ---Ha ha, when you left Friday, Jenny, this thread didn't exist. We were talking about E&E on the 1000+ posts thread and I decided it was a topic that warranted its own discussion. Obviously I was right.


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You are right, Leslie.  I think I actually checked the thread Saturday early morning before I left for the weekend trip, when I was supposed to finish packing.   ::)

JennyC:

--- Quote from: louisev on June 26, 2006, 01:35:52 pm ---*blush!*  hi JennyC!  Feel free to join the party.

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HAHA, it’s me who should do the blushing here.  Some people here know that I normally stay clear discussion of explicit [cough] scenes.  But I should say that I have been gradually corrupted by the collective “raunchiness” of our genius members here.  If I don’t provide comments for some chapters, please know that I am busy blushing ;).

If I may Louise, I would like to make a little plea here.  Can you write some more scenes there Ellery really kicks some a** around, whether in the court, in the office, or in the bar?  His language (ok, it’s really yours) is so humorous and colorful.  I really get a kick out of his sarcasm.

louisev:
oh I see!  So you're a blusher.  You might want to reserve a  :o icon for the chapter I just wrote them, it's a doozy.

Yeah I like Ellery's explosive temper too.  There will be opportunities for him to explode, don't worry.  He still has Amos, Bill, Justin the murderer, and of course his favorite target - Wayne, to blow up at!

Lumière:

--- Quote from: louisev on June 26, 2006, 02:22:05 pm ---  There will be opportunities for him to explode, don't worry. 

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I think Ellery is exploding very fine right now thank you ... ;D
Ok...one-track dirty mind talking..never mind me.. :laugh:

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