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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on July 16, 2006, 07:29:10 am ---We can make a poll of this, if you like, Louise...
I actually wish we could put the poll here, in the thread, not just in the polling place....but I don't think we can.
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errr... I think we better keep this one "in house".
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 16, 2006, 07:50:07 am ---errr... I think we better keep this one "in house".
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Agreed!
louisev:
Folks, please do not be alarmed. I am going out of town in about five minutes and won't be back until late my time. There won't be any updates today on "A Second Chance" (but you had more than enough yesterday!)
Thank you for all of your wonderful comments here and in LJ and I will see you... tomorrow...!
neatfreak:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 16, 2006, 07:12:20 am ---I should take a poll: which sex adventure that Ennis had with Ellery was the most erotic?
1) Burned Biscuits
2) Lariat bondage
3) Silk tie bondage
4) Dildo Sex
5) Vibrator Sex
6) Role Reversal (Bottom Ennis)
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The one that burned my biscuits was "Role Reversal;" it reminded me of the movie scene when Ennis surrendered to his feelings for Jack (although I know your canon is the story). The act of surrender for Ennis is not easy and it makes me just melt when it happens.
See you tomorrow, Louise! :-*
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 16, 2006, 07:12:20 am ---oh you like that part of the story do you?
I should take a poll: which sex adventure that Ennis had with Ellery was the most erotic?
1) Burned Biscuits
2) Lariat bondage
3) Silk tie bondage
4) Dildo Sex
5) Vibrator Sex
6) Role Reversal (Bottom Ennis)
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Actually, for me, the most erotic is one that is not on your list...the day with the buttplug. Something about Ellery's neediness, which he could not even articulate except to say, "I know you might think I am nuts..." Ennis's confusion and even some thoughts that this might be getting out there a little bit too far, but still willing to accept it because Ellery is his lover. The day, with "that thing" there in both their minds, throughout the day. And then the end, with the intense passionate lovemaking...to me, all of this was erotic. That was a great chapter.
Leslie
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