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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
laurel:
This gets my vote for one of the best Ennis and Ellery moments:
“Yep... but I got a special request for ya, sweetheart... you were so good about the lariat an all...”
“Want me ta tie ya ta the bed this time?” Ennis rasped, head falling against the back of the sofa as he felt the soft wetness of Ellery’s lips zone in on his left nipple, sucking deeply before letting go, and he looked up.
“Nope... I want ta fuck you again, Ennis. From on top. On yer knees.”
“Ohhh....” Ennis breathed, a shiver going through him at the words, on yer knees.... and his arousal became obvious moments later, Ellery’s long fingers working open the buckle on his denims and unzipping him.
“I’ll make it real good for ya, I figured I could give you a good tonguin first of all to get you loosened up, an make you come real good...” he lapped at the nipple between words, his right thumb pressing the top of his cock as it pressed against his drawers, aching to get out, "an once yer all nice an muzzy then slide in an give you a real smooth ride, whattaya say, cowboy?”
“Yeahhhh just... be careful...”
“Yer cock sure likes the idea,” Ellery murmured against his chest, scraping his teeth gently against the edge of his nipple, causing Ennis’s back to arch, and his cock to twitch hard under the rubbing thumb abrading his tip through the taut fabric.
Well, I could just quote the whole chapter, because it's all great, but I think you get the idea! ::)
A Second Chance, Chapter 4 A Special request
louisev:
oh yeah, that one.
Hard to argue with the comment "Yer cock sure likes the idea."
MaineWriter:
I don't have the books in front of me and I am literally rushing out the door for mey trip, but fragments of conversation that I often flash back on:
Ellery saying, "How does a grown man have such a soft face?" when they are sitting together on his couch.
Ellery says, "I have a theory..." (I think Ennis says something in the middle) then Ellery continues, "I think we're falling in love."
There are tons more of course...
L
RonitR:
The scene laurel quoted is a doozy.
The last time Ellery was on top, and Ennis thought he was "dominant", was HOT too.
Also, poor Edna finding the Vaseline in their bedroom had me in stitches.. :laugh:
louisev:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on August 01, 2006, 06:02:11 am ---I don't have the books in front of me and I am literally rushing out the door for mey trip, but fragments of conversation that I often flash back on:
Ellery saying, "How does a grown man have such a soft face?" when they are sitting together on his couch.
Ellery says, "I have a theory..." (I think Ennis says something in the middle) then Ellery continues, "I think we're falling in love."
There are tons more of course...
L
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hurry, you fool! I thought you were already gone!
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