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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
And who can forget the "coital embrace" from "A Second Chance", chapter 44:
“Turn ta me, kiss me darlin...” Ennis said, voice husky as he whispered into his hair, and Ellery turned his head, Ennis fastening his mouth once more on his full lips, tongue brushing his tongue, rolling his hips up and thrusting in, keeping his mouth firmly fastened on Ellery’s, his tongue inside it, a position only possible due to the narrow circumference of Ellery’s torso and Ennis’s long, flexible body. He deepened the kiss, his hips now thrusting deeply and regularly, his arm holding his lover firmly against him in an intimate coital embrace. They held it for long minutes, before the increasing tension inside Ellery’s bowels gripped Ennis’s shaft, signalling an ascent to orgasm, and he pulled his left arm back, pressing his hand down on the bed as he positioned himself for full, deep thrusts, his moans low pitched but rising in volume as his excitement overtook him, right hand clenching down on Ellery’s hip as he buried his cock and erupted, clenching his teeth on his shoulder and nipping hard with a savage growl of pleasure, the bite sending a second deep shudder through them both as Ellery’s sphincter spasmed hard from the bolt of erotic pain, and he cried out with sudden joyful release.
louisev:
Update to "Shelter From the Storm"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/85840.html "Chapter 41: Another Lost Weekend"
pastorfred:
I believe that it's possible, if every fan of the Laramie Saga wrote down their favorite moments, we would the entire Saga duplicated by the favorites. It seems that there is not a single wasted word.
Of course I do have my own favorites, and for me this is a repost:
from A Second Chance chapter 22
“I think of us as partners, Ennis. An partners is… partners. I ain’t got nobody but you, an I want ta share my life with you, an that means sharin what I got.”
from A Second Chance chapter 68
“You are one fiercely possessive man, Ennis. I think I like it.”
“Ya do?”
Ellery put the palm of his hand on Ennis’ sweaty chest. “I ain’t never felt like this about anyone, sweetheart. I want... I want us ta be together like this, like partners. Like... a real married couple.”
“Yeah, ya mentioned....” Ennis replied, the color on his face deepening.
“What a you think about that?”
“I think.... I think I want it too.”
“I love you, Ennis, I love ya like life itself.” Ellery’s grey eyes swam with tears. Ennis leaned in and pressed his lips against his.
“I love ya too darlin. Like life itself.”
from A Second Chance chapter 78
“He lost out when he left you all that long ago. Yer mine now.”
Ellery smiled. “I like bein yers, ya know that?”
“That makes two of us. C’mere.”
from A Second Chance chapter 79
“We need a drink.”
“An a smoke. You stay there.”
Ennis padded out to the front room, returning with the cigars and the bottle of Glenfiddich and a single glass.
“One glass?”
“We’re celebratin,” Ennis said.
“What are we celebratin?”
“You an me, boy. Ennis an Ellery.” He lighted the cigar, puffed on it, and leaned over, offering it to Ellery, who took it between his lips. Then he poured a shot of scotch and lifted it. “To us. You belongin ta me, an me belongin ta you.” He took a sip, and handed it to Ellery, who took a sip from it as he handed the cigar back.
“To me belongin ta you, an you belongin ta me,” he repeated, gulping down the fiery liquid, handing the cigar back to Ennis, who took a puff on it.
scudder:
Fred, you got to me with your quotes. I am with you one hundred percent.
louisev:
Update to "Shelter From the Storm"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/86225.html "Chapter 42: Trouble in High Places"
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