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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on June 27, 2006, 01:55:04 pm ---
“Ennis this here’s Wesley Brown, Sheriff a Laramie County an my pain in the ass boss.” The beefy man, with puffy, apple red cheeks and an easy smile, overtopped both Ennis and Ellery by several inches, and reached out a red-palmed hand to clasp Ennis’s.
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Another suggestion for WES: :)
Lumière:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on June 27, 2006, 02:04:09 pm ---The guy on the RIGHT is what I think "Bill" looks like. I picture Bill (Ellerys ex) to be about 10 yrs older than Ellery.
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I don't see Ellery dating that dude! ;D Hehe....
louisev:
actually mr. Apple Red cheeks is a front runner for the physical description of Wes I gave. Though in second draft I think I might have to make Wes barely taller than Ellery, since they are growin em too big there.
David:
--- Quote from: Lucise on June 27, 2006, 02:06:00 pm ---I don't see Ellery dating that dude! ;D Hehe....
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LOL, Well they dated years before! Bill might have been 40 or so and Ellery 30?
This guy has a "Businessman/Bar owner look" that I expected when he first met Ennis.
So I had that vision in my head before I knew he dated Ellery. But I know a lot of guy who date or dated guys ten years there senior.
David:
--- Quote from: louisev on June 27, 2006, 02:07:03 pm ---actually mr. Apple Red cheeks is a front runner for the physical description of Wes I gave. Though in second draft I think I might have to make Wes barely taller than Ellery, since they are growin em too big there.
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Maybe I can photoshop off his mustache? :P
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