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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
notBastet:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 07, 2006, 09:22:19 pm ---There. I'm not so sick I can't manage to get a chapter written.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/89208.html "Chapter 54: Rich Folks"
--- End quote ---
The drought has ended! Hallelujah!
(The rain dance I did walking to my car tonight must have worked!)
;D
pastorfred:
First and foremost, we're all so glad you are both home safe and sound, Leslie and Louise. Secondly, Louise, please take good care of your health and well being most of all. Don't go to work if you don't feel up to it. Only write updates if they help you feel better.
All that being said, I just have to make a comment on the early chapters of Taking Chances. I know I'm a little slow on the uptake sometimes, but I have just noticed something delightful in my latest reading: The way Ellery refers to the car he and Ennis are using reflects the development of their growing relationship. The first time Ennis enters the El Camino, he says, "My coach awaits." When Ennis enters the unmarked, he says, "Your coach awaits." As they prepare to return the unmarked, he says, "Our coach awaits." Mine, yours, and then ours! What fun!
Lumière:
Err.. Fred, I dont think you are ever slow on the uptake, me sometimes, but .. anyway .. ;D
Great observation on the coach stuff!
I can't wait to go back to the very beginning and start reading all over again.. I plan to do that when I print all the chapters out on paper. :)
laurel:
Louise and Leslie,
I'm happy to hear that you had a nice time in London, and that you are both now home safe and sound. Louise, I hope that the sore throat, sniffles, etc. doesn't develop into a real cold. Take care of yourself! We can be patient waiting for the next chapter if need be. Don't push yourself too hard!
Thank you both for posting chapters from London! That was an unexpected treat!
laurel:
Neatfreak,
It's great that you are keeping a list of where we live. We are certainly an international group! Please add me to the New England contingent. I live in Rocky Hill, Connecticut (EDT).
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