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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
Update to "Shelter from the Storm" fresh from my sickbed.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/89457.html "A Hard Training"
Teaser:
Ennis was still hesitating. Finger fucking Ellery was a way of delaying his own decision whether he should actually fuck him, considering his back. But at the same time, Ellery was a big boy and he had promised he would be honest about his condition – and Ennis had to start trusting that. Besides, he could go as slow as he wanted to – he was in control of the sex. He drove his fingers deep into the twitching heat of Ellery’s ass, then pulled out, sliding his left hand up Ellery’s left thigh and edging closer, walking on his knees, until their thighs touched. he lifted his cock, rubbing it against Ellery’s hole, looking down at him. “This is gonna be real slow, boy, cause I ain’t gonna hurt you.”
MaineWriter:
While Louise gave us a teaser, this is my favorite paragraph:
“Thank you,” Ennis leaned over, brushing his thumb across Ellery’s damp cheek, pushing loose strands of hair back from Ellery’s forehead and tucking them behind his ear. “It’s cause I love you.” Then Ennis leaned down and brushed his lips softly across Ellery’s lips, kissing him as gently as he had penetrated him earlier... giving him a subtle message.
I just love the imagery of their faces so close together, light hair, dark hair, Ennis's fingers in Ellery's hair, pushing it back....sigh.....
L
pastorfred:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on August 08, 2006, 09:38:22 am ---While Louise gave us a teaser, this is my favorite paragraph:
“Thank you,” Ennis leaned over, brushing his thumb across Ellery’s damp cheek, pushing loose strands of hair back from Ellery’s forehead and tucking them behind his ear. “It’s cause I love you.” Then Ennis leaned down and brushed his lips softly across Ellery’s lips, kissing him as gently as he had penetrated him earlier... giving him a subtle message.
I just love the imagery of their faces so close together, light hair, dark hair, Ennis's fingers in Ellery's hair, pushing it back....sigh.....
L
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I'm with you 100 percent, Leslie. This has to be one of my favorite paragraphs in the whole saga. With this deep expression of love, we catch a glimpse of the shelter from the storm that Ennis and Ellery have in each other. At last we can see that volume 4 was most aptly named.
Lumière:
Morning folks! :)
Louise, don't be getting no bronchitis now .. :-\
Do take it easy and get plenty of rest! :-*
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: Lucise on August 07, 2006, 10:20:33 pm ---I can't wait to go back to the very beginning and start reading all over again.. I plan to do that when I print all the chapters out on paper. :)
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I did that, so i can take E&E with me on holiday tomorrow. 830 pages and i haven't even added the last chapter!
--- Quote from: pastorfred on August 08, 2006, 11:18:00 am ---I'm with you 100 percent, Leslie. This has to be one of my favorite paragraphs in the whole saga. With this deep expression of love, we catch a glimpse of the shelter from the storm that Ennis and Ellery have in each other. At last we can see that volume 4 was most aptly named.
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and i'm with you 100 percent on that Fred. Now there's a surprise!
Louise, i hope you'll feel better soon. Any time you need a refill on those chocolats, just let me know ok? ;)
I'll wave to you tomorrow as we pass Saarbrücken on our way to Italy :)
Fabienne
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