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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Lumière:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on August 08, 2006, 02:30:52 pm ---That soups looks good, Milli, I think we need a recipe for it for the gallery!
L
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True that!
That's what I had for lunch few minutes ago .. well near enough, and .. yummy! ;)
belbbmfan:
hi neatfreak,
Leuven, Belgium here (CET=EDT+6)
laurel:
--- Quote from: DavidinHartford on August 08, 2006, 06:04:16 am ---<waves> Howdy Neighbor! ;D
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<waves back> Howdy David! :)
laurel:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on August 08, 2006, 09:38:22 am ---While Louise gave us a teaser, this is my favorite paragraph:
“Thank you,” Ennis leaned over, brushing his thumb across Ellery’s damp cheek, pushing loose strands of hair back from Ellery’s forehead and tucking them behind his ear. “It’s cause I love you.” Then Ennis leaned down and brushed his lips softly across Ellery’s lips, kissing him as gently as he had penetrated him earlier... giving him a subtle message.
I just love the imagery of their faces so close together, light hair, dark hair, Ennis's fingers in Ellery's hair, pushing it back....sigh.....
L
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I totally agree with Leslie and Fred about this passage. It is just beautiful. (although the hot sweaty part was pretty damn good, too! ;))
Laurel
Lumière:
I am just printing out the latest chapters to read tonight! :)
BBM has completely swallowed up my free time .. lol, if I am not reading fanfics, I am on BT, if I am not on BT, I am playing around with my paint program doing BBM, Jake/Heath, E&E foto art stuff, if I am not doing that I am watching BBM, if I am not doing that, I feel like I damn well oughta be! O boy! ;D I love it!
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