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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
notBastet:
I started this long winded post on Louise's LJ... but as I kept blabbering on, figured it more appropriate to continue it over here:
SPOILER
This is totally CSI!!!
I don't know how you managed to get all this set out Louise. You have confirmed my desire to never be involved in detectivin' stuff! Very enjoyable to read, but way too complicated for my little brain to figure out.
Maybe someone can prepare a Cliff's notes?
Seems like smarmy [dumb] Brad is on his way to getting out of their lives, huh? At least, I hope so.
Regarding Leslie's comment about Brad maybe having a good heart deep down, just being confused (sorry Leslie, I'm paraphrasing)... personally I don't have any sort of impression of what he's really like deep down. I haven't really tried to sympathize with him though. I have of course been totally annoyed with his flirting with Ellery all along, and I am glad Ellery seems to have lost all tolerance for it. Maybe if I learn more about Brad and his life I will care more about him, but I just don't right now. One of the things I'm confused about is whether or not the Brotherhood knows he is queer? (sorry that was a horribly worded sentence.) Okay I don't know why I'm having such a strong reaction to Brad - aside from the fact that he got his former friend killed and hampered another investigation and had Ennis beaten up/kidnapped. Okay, I'm also pissed 'cause he seems willing to let his money do all his work for him.
I dislike Brad more than Amos right now, is that crazy????
Okay I'm going to try and calm down and read neatfreak's post again.
>:(
notBastet:
--- Quote from: neatfreak on August 08, 2006, 04:42:22 pm ---Within this new way of looking at love, I'm discovering things about myself. I'm examining my own feelings about sex, its role in my marriage, and its natural place in our world. I have to say I've always wondered what all the fuss was about over consensual sexual practices. There doesn't seem to be a forum for discussion of what it all means except in places like this. Is this a first? It is for me.
We are clearly such sexual creatures and yet we keep it hidden like an underground river: powerful, hidden just beneath the surface, with the capacity to nourish or drown, depending on whether we open the gates or dam it all up. This exploration of love and life with Ennis and Jack and now Ellery is nourishing me in ways I didn't know were possible. Better late than never!
--- End quote ---
I am not articulating well this evening neatfreak, but wanted to attempt to respond to some of this. Basically, I agree with you completely! I don't know if men feel this way (about themselves, not about us), but one of my personal gripes with the world relates to society and sexuality and how women are viewed/treated. I think it's 'the world at large' but I also think it penetrates our everyday lives as well. "Look fetching but don't look slutty." "Don't be a prude but don't be easy either." It's like in theory you are supposed to be open and free about sex, but then you're not supposed to tell anyone about it. I don't know if I'm making any sense, and I'm trying to avoid being too personal or giving TMI (lol), but yes, for whatever reason, exploring all this stuff with Ennis and Jack and Ellery is nourishing.
magicmountain:
The Ballad of Ennis and Ellery
Laramie town
of Wild West renown
saw heroes in its day
But none so bold, so brave, so gay
as Ennis and Ellery for they say
these boys sure took your breath away
They outperformed the rest by far
The locals still retell
the famous tale of Ennis Del Mar
and Deputy Ellery John Cantrell
Ennis came to Laramie town
to find himself and look around
He stumbled into Ellery’s bar
and ran straight into some bizarre
behaviours that he thought by far
the strangest sights seen by Del Mar
Near nude boys with painted faces
dancing round in pink shoelaces
Men were kissing and embracing
Ennis quaked, his brain was racing
If this was what was meant by queer
he thought that he was outta here
Then suddenly a silence fell
The stripping stopped
(and just as well)
Ennis paused
saved by the bell
and Deputy Ellery John Cantrell
Ennis did a double take
He thought perhaps this guy was fake
But one look in those smoky eyes
and Ennis Del Mar was hypnotised
Ellery fixed his gaze on Ennis
Felt that air of brooding menace
Lusted after eyes so brown
that curly hair
that cute lil frown
So Deputy Ellery John Cantrell
went after Ennis Del Mar
And it didn’t take long for the sparks to fly
as they sat and drank at the bar
Though Ennis was shy
he fell for the guy
and ended up drunk in bed
with a bottle of whisky
that got them so frisky
they woke up next morning half dead
Ennis and Ellery found true love
and Laramie is their home
Never will Ellery leave his man
nor ever will Ennis roam
And still they say
in Laramie town
the local folks retell
The Epic Romance
of Ennis Del Mar and Deputy Ellery John Cantrell
Ennis and Ellery’s fame has spread
(along with exploits in their bed)
And you can read it all online
courtesy Louise van Hine
notBastet:
MAGICMOUNTAIN!!!
Holy Moly that was super duper fantastic!! Who should we get to record it for us? Waylon Jennings?
;D
JennyC:
--- Quote from: notBastet on August 08, 2006, 10:32:18 pm ---MAGICMOUNTAIN!!!
Holy Moly that was super duper fantastic!! Who should we get to record it for us? Waylon Jennings?
;D
--- End quote ---
I second that. This is amazing!
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