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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
Allrighty Then! (in the words of Ace Ventura...)
With the revision and adding of the new chapters 80 through 83, the previous chapters (now headed 84, 85, and 86) have gone through minimal morphing and now appear in proper order with a header noting that they have undergone minor editing changes, as follows
(**NOTE: This chapter has undergone minor editing changes and revisions with the addition of new chapters 80 through 83)
If you are unsure whether you have the flow of events correctly, things were altered slightly at the end of Chapter 79, entitled "The Dream Come True", by adding three chapters following chapter 79. You may wish to go back and reread from chapter 78 or 79 or so to get the full gist of events on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. You will recognize (since they are barely changed) chapters 84, 85 and 86.
Because I just wrote chapter 83 which has some getting fancy in it, I can't move on right now to the chapter 87 getting fancy part, so that will have to wait till tomorrow. I think we all agree however, that demolishing a $30 tuxedo rental was worth it. At least... I hope so.
ifyoucantfixit:
--- Quote from: Lucise on August 21, 2006, 11:41:18 pm ---No leaving out Heath, no way... ;)
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OH MY GOLLY YESS passes out falls to floor
louisev:
For those who are wondering just how silly I can get... and for those who need a confirmation, please see the following thread links:
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php?topic=4084.msg79235#msg79235 "Alien!Brokeback!"
Completely "In Canon" (and completely tongue in cheek)
LoveEmBoys:
Louise,
I have to admit when I first read the synopsis that Ennis would be taking Ellery to Brokeback Mtn I did have an uneasy feeling. That of sharing what is too sacred to share. But uneasy feelings aside, I have no intention to put aside the forthcoming volume -- I know you always handle all three of our boys and their feelings very well, so I only look forward to going on the vacation with E&E.
Fred -- what a moving passage you wrote about you and your first and second wives. What a wonderfully loving and open relationship you must have with them both. Kudos to you.
Monica
pastorfred:
--- Quote from: LoveEmBoys on August 25, 2006, 11:24:52 pm ---Louise,
Fred -- what a moving passage you wrote about you and your first and second wives. What a wonderfully loving and open relationship you must have with them both. Kudos to you.
Monica
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Monica -
Thank you so much for those kind words! As you can tell from what I wrote, what I have to say about finding a new love is not a theory. It's part of my own story. It's how I know that Ennis can love again. As Ennis moves forward in his new life with Ellery, I feel that I'm able to move forward, too. The story of the Laramie Saga is very important to me, again, not as a theory, but as a very personal source of hope and healing.
Kudos and thanks to our dear Louise! Please, everybody keep good thoughts and prayers for her regarding her dental health and her visa renewal. It's our privilege to do this small spiritual thing for one who continues to do so much for all of us.
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