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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Lumière:
Speaking of horses .. We need to cast Calico!
Any ideas? I know she is a chestnut mare with white spots on her face. All we need is a chestnut mare and I can add the spots to her face .. :P
She is cute, but she took the spots thing too far .. ;)
Any suggestions horse lovers? :)
louisev:
*whoa!* Lucise. That sure is one CALICO horse!
louisev:
Okay folks, in celebration of my rapid and unprecedented recovery....
Update to "The Long Way Home"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/104122.html "Chapter 7: A Forgotten Date"
louisev:
At Kelly's gentle request:
A list of Chapter Enders (not all one-liners)
First, from "Taking Chances"
Chapter 12
Ellery: "We wasted plenty a time already on you and your piece a ass, Bill. Now let's see the scene a the fight."
Chapter 18
Pete put on a look of malevolent glee and grinned up at the two men. “I took his weddin ring.”
Chapter 21
Ellery glanced over at Ennis, who nodded. Then he raised his glass, and leaned over, clinking it against Ennis’s. “Then here’s to a fair ending to an absolutely shitty Friday off, and to friendship,” and drank deeply, never taking his eyes off Ennis.
Chapter 23
Ennis reached for his own hat and set it down, and it cocked against the black hat. “To ... Glenfiddle Scotland,” he said. “Wherever the hell it is.”
Chapter 24
Several long moments passed as Ennis’s breathing returned to normal. “Maybe it’s time you told me bout this book,” Ellery said.
Chapter 25
And when the bolt of pleasure straightened his back, he cried out softly, “Oh, Jack!” and gasped as Ellery rose and knelt, placing his mouth over his erupting cock and sucking him empty, eventually, as he softened, Ellery straightened back up against him and put his face against Ennis’s shoulder. Ennis had thrown his arm over his eyes. “I’m... sorry, bout that Ellery.”
“It don’t matter,” Ellery chuckled. “My middle name’s Jack.”
Chapter 28
“Still.” Ennis straightened up at the sink and gave Ellery a fierce look. “Still love em. Never told em. Still love em. An won’t ever stop.”
Ellery nodded. “As it should be.”
Chapter 32
Ennis: “I’d do just about anything fer you right now,” he whispered, repeating back what Ellery had told him this morning. “Cause I like you just fine.”
Chapter 36
Ennis: “Yeah. Can you make this thing stop an go back? I wanna see him washin up in the bathroom again.”
Ellery: “Sure, you press this thing here.”
Chapter 41:
Ellery: “Lets have some coffee and do all this again, only this time slower.”
Chapter 42:
Their breathing slowed in unison, it seemed, small drops of sweat trickled off Ennis’s chest and into the thin coverlet beneath him as he cooled off, his hand slick against Ellery’s hip, and his cock slipped out by degrees, still twitching with the remaining tremors of their pleasure. “Damn boy...” Ellery whispered. “You got a great right hook.”
Chapter 44:
Ennis tore his eyes away from the window, taking a deep breath, and grabbed Ellery with both hands. “Yer rilin me up again boy.”
“Good deal, that was the plan.” And he tilted his head down slightly for the hard kiss he knew was coming next.
Chapter 50:
“Shit, boy, that was great,” Ennis said, reaching for the box of cigars that lay on the coffee table.
“Good movie, wasn’t it?” Ellery replied.
Chapter 51:
“Now don’t you be steppin out on me with that doughboy or you’re gonna see some smoke.”
Ennis picked up the empty roll the biscuits came in. “Wonder if he left his number. He tastes really fuckin good.”
Chapter 60:
Ellery sniffed, nibbled at Ennis’s lip before he stepped back. “Chief Deputy darlin ta you.”
Chapter 64:
“Think a the girl on the butter,” Ellery said with a confident smile, and got out of the car, walking without a limp to the noise of voices and music in the Sheriff’s back yard.
Chapter 65:
Edna Brown leaned over, patting his back. “Somethin go down wrong, Ennis?” she asked softly.
“No, ma’am, everythin’s fine.” But right now, all Ennis could think of was the moment in the bathroom when Ellery told him he had named his cock “Jack.”
Chapter 66:
“Well, it’s true. An we’re cousins right?” Ennis gave Ellery a tight smile, not quite accepting the tale Ellery had spun on his behalf. “Cousins visit don’t they?”
“Yeah, but kissin cousins do moren that, Ennis. Let’s go get yer truck.”
Chapter 72:
Ennis: “Well, at least I got somethin ta tell Junior that doesn’t involve queer, courts, an lawyers.”
Ellery laughed. “That’s lookin on the bright side of things.”
Chapter 73:
Ennis laughed hoarsely. “Ain’t those illegal?”
Ellery: “Well, yeah. That’s what makes em taste so good.”
Chapter 77:
Wes: “Now, let’s eat. I’m in a bad mood an only one thing improves it. My wife’s cookin.”
Chapter 88
“Sweetheart,” Ellery said softly, his voice pitched with the husky tone of satisfied lust.
“Whut?” he asked, his heart thudding.
“Doughboys are burnin.”
notBastet:
Thanks so much Louise. What a great idea I had!
;)
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