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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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MaineWriter:

--- Quote from: louisev on June 29, 2006, 08:29:05 am ---too much hair?  what do you mean?  Looks clean cut to me.

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"At that, Marigold took two steps back, then fled, strands of unkempt hair flying."

The guy in that picture doesn't look like he has the type of hair that has strands. It is more male helmet hair.

MaineWriter:

--- Quote from: Bigheart on June 29, 2006, 08:57:08 am ---Hi Louise, Leslie! and all the other folks out there  :)

I finally took the plunge and registered! I am SO excited! This place is GREAT! What a breath of fresh air!

It's going to take me a while to catch up! but it's going to be so much fun to do so!!

Are you going to update today Louise??  ;D

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Bigheart, welcome!

I am delighted to have you join us. This is a fun group and we love to discuss all things Ennis and Ellery, funny, serious and in between. Read through the thread and don't be shy..

L

MaineWriter:
A minor character, but who knows, he may show up again. I offer, for the group's opinion, a candidate for Nate the radiator repairman.


louisev:

--- Quote from: Bigheart on June 29, 2006, 08:57:08 am ---Hi Louise, Leslie! and all the other folks out there  :)

I finally took the plunge and registered! I am SO excited! This place is GREAT! What a breath of fresh air!

It's going to take me a while to catch up! but it's going to be so much fun to do so!!

Are you going to update today Louise??  ;D

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yes yes yes.  You just get here and you're already making demands?  Gee JUNE!

Update to "A Second Chance"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/62922.html  "Love and Gratitude."

louisev:

--- Quote from: MaineWriter on June 29, 2006, 09:16:28 am ---A minor character, but who knows, he may show up again. I offer, for the group's opinion, a candidate for Nate the radiator repairman.




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and he's got a cap on!  That isn't bad.  I pictured him as a little less ... er, dashing though.

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