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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
laurel:
No matter what the aim is clear
To get his c**k up Ellery’s rear!
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
What a great poem! Thanks for my best laugh of the day.
yb:
mm, great poem as always. Thanks for these hilarious peoms.
magicmountain:
I've been thinking ... to even things up, next time Ellery should insist that Ennis be bottom, handcuffed and wearing only cowboy hat and boots - plus maybe his buckle on a new belt.
Ellery could pretend he is the sheriff of Wild West Laramie rounding up the aptly named Wild Bill Hickock (maybe renamed Wild Ennis Hickock!) and throwing him into the caboose.
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: magicmountain on October 21, 2006, 02:37:09 am ---I've been thinking ... to even things up, next time Ellery should insist that Ennis be bottom, handcuffed and wearing only cowboy hat and boots - plus maybe his buckle on a new belt.
Ellery could pretend he is the sheriff of Wild West Laramie rounding up the aptly named Wild Bill Hickock (maybe renamed Wild Ennis Hickock!) and throwing him into the caboose.
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Ooooh, I like this! ;D
And I absolutely love that poem, as always. A GREAT start to my day :)
Kazza:
--- Quote from: ranchgal on October 20, 2006, 09:40:47 pm ---
I am wondering HOW exactly Ennis is going to explain leaving Ellery cuffed---and how he is going to apologize for it. I also think that is most of the reason Ellery unloaded on Dupree---I think all that worry/fright adrenaline of possibly getting caught literally with his pants down, and no way to be able to pull them up--got him going, and Dupree got what he would have given Ennis--considering Ennis told him he would never leave him trussed up again like that due to interuptions. sex play like they are doing requires trust, and Ennis is not living up to his end of the bargain. I would hate to see Ellery not want to play anymore cause he can't trust Ennis to stay there and take care of him first.
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I think that you're totally right there. Ellery must have extremely vunerable and exposed, and Dupree bore the brunt of that. It is a trust thing as you said. Also, Ellery admitted he has a temper when he was telling Ennis about his less attractive traits.
Now to add to that he's been confronted with that video tape. Ellery must be feeling a bit knocked off course right now.
Ennis has a lot of making up to do, and support to provide methinks. Hope it hasn't spoiled their exchange of tokens. Because that was lovely.
Karen
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