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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
yb:
Spoiler
I really like these 2 chapters very much, having Ennis watched the tape is the best solution. Now, I wonder if Ellery would tell Ennis Francine had seen Lance and Sergio in the apartment.
Kazza:
SPOILER
I really liked those chapters Louise. I was worried that Ellery was going to go ballistic at Ennis, but they seem to have resolved the trust issue relatively calmly. I don't think Ennis will let something like that happen again. I certainly hope not.
I like the way that you've brought the similarity of Ellery (physically portryed by Hugh Jackman) to Clint Eastwood into the story. :)
So, is Ennis sitting traumatised at home after having to watch a tape of men that he knows having sex with each other? I mean, apart from the dodgy tape that Bill left behind he's not been exposed to anything of that nature before has he? I'm curious as to what his reaction was. Did he find it arousing, and did this make him feel guilty, or was he simply an unfazed observer?
Karen
louisev:
good question Karen, as always.
And as usual... I won't be answering that one!
Kazza:
;D
Ah, Louise I know that you won't. Everything that we need to know is contained within your updates.
I just can't help these questions that flit through my brain, and this is the only forum I have to express them. I have thought about accosting random strangers in the street and discussing the story arc with them, but I might end up in a bouncy room.
It just struck me on this particular occasion that this was something way out of Ennis range of experience, and he seemed to agree quite easily when Ellery asked him (out of love no doubt).
All will be revealed I'm sure.
Karen
louisev:
At the moment Ellery asked him to, Ennis was feeling quite eager to please!
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