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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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Bigheart:

--- Quote from: Lucise on October 24, 2006, 06:14:14 pm ---As the French would say .. mission accomplie ..  ;D



(Until Louise lets her out again, that is ..)

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Merci beaucoup madame  :-*

I hope Louise throws away the damn key  ;D

Kazza:

--- Quote from: louisev on October 24, 2006, 05:23:24 pm ---Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/139827.html  "Chapter 56:  Vandals"

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SPOILER


Oh dear, so who's got it in for the boys now? It might just be teenage hoodlums, or it may be something more sinister.

I really liked that Ellery, knowing Ennis, tries to look beneath the surface of his reaction, thinking that his kidnapping may have left deeper scars than it would appear. I also liked that Ennis had started dealing with the siutation before Ellery got home (even if he was potentially tampering with evidence), without disturbing him at work (like Bill would have).

And the ending was touching - that Ellery knows that he may have to stay up half the night dealing with the graffiti, but he'll do it for Ennis' peace of mind.

They'll need some cuddling and cozy chats after their toil I'm thinking  ;)

Karen

christie wood:
SPOILERS

I liked the way Ellery handled the situation - he was having to be reassuring to Ennis and professional at the same time as this was a crime and he didnt want Ennis to make things worse, although I understood why Ennis would want those awful words scrubbed off the house.  Ellery is really perceptive about Ennis, knows that his angry exterior is hiding a lot, and knows that he will have to have a lot of reassuring words for him.   

Kazza:
Hey Christie, we've got a kind of Ennis/Jack ying/yang thing going on with our avatars.

Karen

christie wood:
Hee Hee, I think you are right Karen!  I love that pic of Jack though - thats the one with the sheep isnt it?  Did you try and get the sheep on the pic as well, or did you just want Jack's face? 

I love all pics of Ennis outside Aguirre's trailer, but I do try and change my avatar now and again, but I find it so difficult to choose, there are so many I love!

I'm liking the ying/yang thing - isnt that what Jake said about Ennis and Jack finding each other on the mountain?

Its quiet around here today isnt it?  Where is everyone?  ???

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