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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
yes, that is part of the reason why the story is plotted that way. He didnt want Bill, he shied away from Wayne and his nipples and tank top at the bar, and naked Pete grabbing his cock in the hotel sort of set him up for some free form sexual frustration that had no proper target.
And enter stage left.. hehehe
tamarack:
"We're gonna have tacos tonight darlin. I hope that's okay." "Sure", Ellery replied...
Well, he's just having himself a real good old time teasing Ennis. What a sweetie. :D
(Do I have to create a whole account to post comments on LiveJournal?)
louisev:
no, you can post anonymous.
tamarack:
I don't mind having my name there, it just looked like they were thinking I was going to be writing stories or something. Everyone signs up for the same account whether you are an author or not?
scudder:
I laughed and I cried, but I laughed much more, and it was good for me to do so. Ellery is a devil, "sure" to Ennis' "darling." And when Alma Jr thought Ennis was "robbing the cradle", BAM! no wonder Ennis laughed. I sure did. So, I think Ellery #2 (KC) is the one Junior would think is so young! "robbing the cradle". Great go, Louise!
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