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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
yb:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 03, 2006, 06:07:04 am ---It is within the realm of dream possibility, I suppose.
But since I ordered up a hot dream about Wolverine and all I got was a dry dull dream about his getting his claws implanted and absolutely nothing romantic whatsoever, I am a bit disgruntled today about ordering up dreams. I got the PG rated one!
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Perhaps you can use your creativity to turn your frustration into some hot chapters.
louisev:
Gee I don't know Betty, a new reader of the Saga just finished "Taking Chances" and said it had too much sex in it! Maybe I need to write less sex.
yb:
As I've said before, sometimes I did feel uneasy reading the sex scenes, but what you write are not sex for sex's sake, they all flow with the story and with so much emotion, so I don't have any problem with them at all.
Kazza:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 03, 2006, 06:29:00 am ---Gee I don't know Betty, a new reader of the Saga just finished "Taking Chances" and said it had too much sex in it! Maybe I need to write less sex.
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What!!?!! What!!!???!!! :o
Souxi! June! Are you reading this! ;)
Karen
louisev:
The thing I have striven for in the sex scenes is that they are a) meaningful to the plot b) original and c) show something new about the characters or gives some insight into their state of mind. Those are the rules I follow for writing a sex scene.
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