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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll

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laurel:

--- Quote from: louisev on November 03, 2006, 07:48:30 pm ---Just because I can - Long-haired Hugh in black leather pants!



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THUD!!!

belbbmfan:
Jo, Laramie - A Lover's Tale, that was just beautiful.

"For Ennis found that hope returns
through pain and loss that sears and burns
The love that shone in Jack’s sweet face
he found in Ellery’s warm embrace"

that really is the heart of this wonderful story! so well said, thank you

souxi:
Mornin all.Mornin June. ;)


QUOTE:
Holy God Louise, Ennis went a bit cro-magnon there didn't he?   Does he ever listen to Ellery once his blood is up? I can see a heated exchange between them once Lorenzo's in custody.   If I was Ellery I'd be a bit fed up with Ennis, especially him decking the young fella after Ellery already had him under arrest. Then again, he wouldn't be under arrest if Ennis hadn't caught him.QUOTE:

I see your point Kazza, yes maybe a did go a bit OTT, but like I said on LJ, his temper is just part of his nature..he cant change that. Once the red mist has come down and your temper has gone flying to the moon thats it, you dont listen or think. He already lost someone he loved very much to violence, and he could do nothing about that. This time he can and he will. He probably wasnt thinking of his own saftey, he was trying to protect Ellery. I dont think he should yell at him. He,ll see his point once he,s calmed down, like he did over the Worrel thing, when yes I know he promised he wouldnt do something like that again, but then we come back to his temper. Someone was trying to hurt his precious Ellery and he lost it. He,s changed an awful lot since he met Ellery, and whereas once, he might have just sat back and said nothing, now he wont. He wont put up with being called a faggot to his face, and why should he? He wont put up with people trying to break into their home and why should he? If I was Ellery, I,d talk about it obviously once everything has calmed down but I wouldnt yell at him. They come from different worlds Ennis and Ellery. Ellery has had a somewhat privilged life. Ennis is a cowboy from the sticks. He,s used to settling things with his fists, thats the way they do things where he comes from. Thats my 2 pence worth anyway. ;)

Kazza:
Souxi - I totally take your point. I guess that losing Jack to a violent attack has made Ennis even more sensitive when it comes to threats to his and Ellery's happiness and safety.

I was having a bit of a knee jerk reaction of my own  ;D

Karen

louisev:
Wonderful poem, Jo... thank you for sharing the message.

And Ranchgal, you haven't missed anything - you summarized the plot we know to date regarding Ellery's former partner during the Bill years.  What is not yet known or revealed is what "Larry"'s beef is about or why he went after Ellery and Ennis at that moment.  Or who his red-haired accomplice is.

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