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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
LoveEmBoys:
“See you at the bar, Ennis,” he winked, a petulant pout on his lips, and he flounced out the door.
Hee - There's my boy!
You know, I don't really know why I'm so darn attached to Wayne, but with lines like this how can I not?! CRAP -- Another chapter?! You are a wonder, Lousie!
M
EDIT: woops, make that : OH Boy, Another Chapter?? ;)
louisev:
I am making it up to everyone for the paucity of writing I did over the weekend.
LoveEmBoys:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 03, 2006, 03:41:05 pm ---Update time:
Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/64863.html "Chapter 55: The Other Man"
--- End quote ---
OK now -- CHAP 55 SPOILERS to follow:
Ellery's showing a new side, huh? I'm diggin the fact that it gets to fall to Ellery to explain the way things are to Junior. Makes all sorts of sense given Ellery and Ennis, and I think it's probably a lot easier for Junior to hear coming from someone other than Ennis. But Ellery schemed Ennis into working at the bar in order to get more comfortable with queers? Am I so incredibly shallow I didn't see that one for what it was? Hrumph. Score another point for Ellery.
And the chasing miniskirts comment? -- made me LOL. Glad Junior was able to take that one in stride.
David:
Warning! Spoilers of Chapter 55.
I think it was a good idea to have Ellery explain things to Alma Jr. Ennis (like any parent) would be embarassed t otalk about that stuff with his daughter.
I am shocked that he kissed Ellery in front of her before going to work! Ennis doesn't even want Ellery to call him "sweetheart" at the bar in front of the guys! LOL
But I'm glad he did. If he wants to maintain a relationship with her she needs to accept him the way he is now.
louisev:
he WAS holding his breath!!!
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