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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 04, 2006, 05:15:07 pm ---Sure sweetie, I will send them in individual messages.
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Woohoo! I just saw 70! Cheers Louise! ;D
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: Marge_Innavera on November 04, 2006, 05:09:37 pm ---Hey, they left out the first tent scene!
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There was a description of that. It merited its own paragraph, I guess because a bit of a bare butt was seen.
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louisev:
there was actually "haunch" not "cheek"
christie wood:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 04, 2006, 04:47:30 pm ---
“Kiss me,” Ellery said softly.
Ennis leaned forward, pressing his lips softly against Ellery’s, sliding one hand behind Ellery’s neck, kissing him gently, unhurriedly, whispering against his lips. “Sorry.”
“Shhh...” Ellery whispered back, pressing his mouth back against Ennis’s, lips parting, kissing him more hungrily now, pulling him in close.
Ennis bent over him, one hand cupping the back of Ellery’s neck, the other sliding down his bare arm, holding him, trying not to lean against him, but needing the contact with his body, the reassurance of intimacy in the aftermath of shock, anger, and pain. They broke the kiss slowly, reluctantly, and as their mouths separated, Ennis whispered to him once more. “I love you.”
Ellery smiled, lids now half-closed. “I know. It’s all right. I got ta sleep now.”
Ennis brushed his fingers across the pale forehead, pushing strands of stray hair away and tucking them behind his ear, then kissing Ellery’s cheek. “I’ll call Dupree now.” He got up, and stopped at the door. Ellery’s head lolled back, eyes now completely closed. He was already asleep.
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Oh Louise, that was lovely, so glad that they kissed and made up. It was so sweet when Ellery asked Ennis to kiss him - it was like his way of saying "everything's ok".
And when Ennis brushes Ellery's hair away from his forehead - that does something to me every time.
Thanks Louise, I havent been able to access lj either, and so I really appreciated you posting the last few chapters here. I've spent the last hour catching up on the last few days' worth of posts here, and it seems I've missed lots of interesting discussions!
Even though I've not been here, I have been commenting on Louise's lj (I'm poppyhoney over there). Hope to be around a bit more now too.
louisev:
Looks like the Livejournal outage has become extended. Look here for updates tomorrow first. I'll post them here before going over to battle with LJ again.
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