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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 23, 2006, 04:19:15 pm ---Update to "The Red Stallion"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/153903.html "Chapter 103: A Game of More"
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*Juuuuuuuuuuuuune*
;D
richardg49:
--- Quote from: louisev on November 23, 2006, 04:19:15 pm ---Update to "The Red Stallion"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/153903.html "Chapter 103: A Game of More"
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Great chapter, Louise
more, More, MORE, please!
christie wood:
SPOILERS
Oh sweet Jeremy, I love him. I could just imagine how nervous he was, and yet wanting to give Nick some encouraging signs that he was really interested as well. The More game was really effective too!!! lol You go Jeremy, just keep saying more and you'll be ok!
That was just such a delicous chapter, full of nervous apprehension (and that was just me!), and sexual anticipation. How cool is Nick, not rushing, not pushing, just letting it all go as slow as Jeremy needs it to go.
Those two revelations were interseting though - firstly that Jeremy carried a crush for Ellery (but who wouldnt?) and that Nick's dad was Ennis and Ellery's doctor. Totally passed me by the fact his name was Sampson and he was talking about his dad's practice - duh! ???
Please DO NOT leave us hanging too long, Louise, dont think I could last untiil after I come back from my weekend away to see how the rest of the night goes.
Lumière:
--- Quote from: richardg49 on November 23, 2006, 04:48:43 pm ---Great chapter, Louise
more, More, MORE, please!
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Yeah, in the words of The Dupree himself ..
M-More .. :D ..
Edit to add:
Now that I have settled down alittle after reading that chapter ..
I think I'll wait half an hour and go read it again .. ;D
louisev:
so you guys... want some more huh? tonight, huh?
okay, well just because it's Thanksgiving.
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