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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
yb:
Louise
Nothing much I can add to what the others have said about the last few chapters. You captured Dupree’s internal struggles, his hesitation and his guilt so brilliantly and convincingly. Inasmuch as I love to read about Ennis and Ellery, these chapters about Dupree’s first sex experience with man just could not spare me a minute to think of them at all. It’s not just about how hot and erotic the sex was, it’s more about how he began to face his feelings and the interactions between him and Nick that gripped my heart totally. And I want to say I’m happy for Jeeves, I just hope Lance will prove to be worthy of Jeeves who I have grown to like a lot.
Lumière:
..And the list keeps getting bigger and bigger .. (not unlike certain things we have encountered in recent chapters.. ;D)
Let me know if I omitted a term, will ya?
to Leslie: the reader in question brings all of his/her begging and pleading and sometimes even bribery, to bear, to increase the local "schmoop" factor in a given chapter or plot element to the desired level.
to Souxi: the reader in question takes leslie-ing to a whole other level with a fair amount of weeping, wailing, howling, .. practically anything to get what he/she wants. Souxi-ers have been known to be downright relentless and they usually get what they want.
to June: to squee like a professionally-trained squeer.
to fistulate: To undergo a period of enforced sexual abstinence, of at least one week's duration, while at the same time getting married.
to Dupreeciate: The phenomenon of a minor character in a work of fiction increasingly absorbing readers' attention until the character threatens to overtake or equal their interest in the nominal main character(s).
to Tooeyminate: To have an uncharacteristically large appetite for muffins. When observed in their natural habitat, tooeyminators are hardly seen without a box of muffins close at hand. Infact, some have been known to leave behind a trail of crumbs.
to westify: an act of civil disobedience, performed as a protest
Hughdity: a view of Hugh Jackman that involves showing off significant assets of his personal charisma, charm,and er, attributes.
Ril-ition: The ability to become suddenly overtaken with intense sexual desire from the touch of a lover or sometimes by the smell of burning pastry (preferably of the Pillsbury variety)
Fancyful: The satisfying sense of contentment, euphoria and repleteness after a sexual encounter with a loved one.
to bunnificate: to have wild sexual fantasies, including falling in love, with someone you have only seen once or twice, and you don't even realize is homosexual...
to jeeviate ~ to follow all rules of etiquette with impeccable taste and class (British heritage optional). Jeeviants make great friends and excellent companions, as they are known to treat all persons with complete respect, without necessarily compromising their beliefs and standards.
to rejeevinate ~ to make it known in no uncertain terms that one needs to get laid and that one is up for absolutely anything to do so.
To edna – An action combining nurturing, feeding and providing general TLC leading to a state of gratification.
Glenfiddled – State of arousal inhibited by maudlin drunkenness
To Sampsonise - to carry out a lightning-fast pickup of a gay sexual virgin, while at the same time promising: "We'll take it slow".
Coyotition: An intimate sexual manouevre indulged in exclusively by horse trainers and deputy sheriffs, wherein one imitates a coyote biting and the other pretends to be a Pillsbury doughboy.
to jeeve ~ to sexually ravish an eager lover with one's designer "equipment" (quite possibly Armani).
After a statement of rejeevination has been issued to the jeevee, the jeever proceeds to take charge of the sexual encounter, leaving the jeevee panting and helpless for more ..
To get Nicked - to be made love to by a skillful, sensitive, ravishingly sexy young lover who is focussed entirely upon one's person to the exclusion of anything else.
to Janice: to make one's blood run cold, and in the case of a male who might possibly have an erection, make it disappear immediately.
magicmountain:
--- Quote from: Sheriff Roland on November 24, 2006, 10:25:05 pm ---Well I guess that's gotta be the nicest thing a heard in a Year.
gave me a glow :)
but if it's the language you's talkin about - blame it on the Laramie Saga - been a big influence
Sheriff Roland
--- End quote ---
Well it's what you say as well as how you say it! ;D ;D
Maybe we could add to the Laramie Lexicon:
A Rolandism - something that Ennis might have said (on those occasions when when Ennis was saying anything at all!)
souxi:
Mornin all, mornin twin. ;) ;D
Well that was some seriously HOT stuff I got to read first thing this morning Louise. :o :o :o :o
I agree with some of the comments on LJ about Janice. She is getting creepy..hanging around on street corners late at night in the dark waiting for Jeremy. Shes a weirdo, dont like her. >:( She,d better not turn out to be like Bunny either, or she,ll feel one of my bombs on her head. ;) ;) ;D
Kelpersmek:
Wow, that new chapter Loise, it's something else.
I really like Nick Sampson the Sailor.
I am worried about what janice will do to him if he does not get out of her way.
That woman has serious problems. She is being very suspicious and nasty.
It started me thinking as to what might happen if you wrote a showdown between Nick and Janice.
I don't know if Nick would veen know what was going on LOL!
I don't want to know any spoilers so I think I will just wait and read what happens with her and Dupree and Nick. But I did really like the idea of a showdown, because that might solve some of the problems for Dupree.
Anyway, I liked the idea so much that I tried to make a piece of fanart for it.
Please be kind, I am not very good at manips, because I can never get the lighting right on people's skins. If anyone has any consturctive criticsm on how to improve my manip skills (I know it takes alot of parctice too!) you could maybe PM me?
Thanks!
Anyway here it is:
I know Nick the Sailor looks like Wentworth Miller.
I didn't know if you had picked a Nurse to play Janice yet though.
It's very funny because I know a Nurse called janice. She doesn't look like the one in the picture though, and is actually a very kind and wonderful person. She has a funny sense of humour, but I don't think she would be waiting for Dupree or terrorizing Nick.
Souxi, if I get a better picture for Janice can I post one of you throwing a bomb at her??? LOL
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